All Comments on 'Bustyland Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
One Small Thing

This is good, both as erotica and just as a story. I look forward to the rest.

One small thing. It's "medical student" not "medicine student."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Amazing story

I rated this a 5. Great story. Great spooky feeling throughout. Can't wait for the next installment. Great transitions between story lines. One of the most original story lines I've ever read on this site. Thanks for sharing your talents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
lovely story

But i think this should be in erotic horror. It would have goteen more stars and comments.

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