Upgrade Ch. 01

Where is this going to go?

Ok you got my attention, keep writing.

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A bit short but a great beginning.

interesting

A good start. Wondering if the son will overpower the mother both physically and mentally or will it be the other way around.... Good luck with the plot where ever it goes. Pete

Off to a good start

I'm looking forrward to more.

Nice begining.

Yery well done. I'm waiting for the second chapter.

Won't .....

Won't be reading the 2nd part as this is way off the charts.!*

MORE

Here is one more vote to continue. Maybe the next chapter could be a little longer?

Great

Great story please continue

Great Start

Can't wait for part two.

great beginning

keep up the good work on edge here

It's a little hard to tell what the story will be like with this short of a chapter

I think chapter two will be a better judgement of the story.

The story has my inerest, but I can't wrap my mind around a 350 pound woman being erotic.

Perhaps the author will find a way to make the story work.

Thanks for the post.

ok

350lb women not sexy

good basis for a great tale

I like where this is going anything can happen the mom could suddenly drop all that weight with excercise or surgery or she could do any number of sexual things but I'm betting she makes herself stunning and steals her son from his girlfriend

How about the mom fattens up the girl friend? Need some more weight gain/bbw stories around here.

nice story

Can wait for upgrade ch 3

Why does a 20 yr old need to ask his Mom permission to spend the weekend with his girlfriend.

Will continue on feedback?

Dude, what an insult to your readers. You post it up and we either like it or we don't. I don't even know if I'll bother with chapter 2.

I've got a feeling that young Matt's...

going to get his hard very fat cock up the same wet warm cunt he came out of. I bet that the gifted author, 18 to 22 years old, was hard when he wrote this series, and that he shot out a good healthy load from his hot young balls at the end. LDIK has a marvelously dirty mind, much like his hero Matt. More stories from this talented writer, please, about boys, their mother's mommy-hole, and where their creamy semen really belongs.