All Comments on 'Making Miley Mine'

by AngelE

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Needs a little more

It was a pretty good story. I do agree it would be too short to "wank off" to but it was a good read. I do feel though it needed some more description and/or depth. I would give it a B-. Keep up the good work.

animeturtleanimeturtlealmost 11 years ago
A little longer

I thought your story was could however please make it longer and yes the story made me hard.

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