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Sun and Earth, Ocean Tides

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by tazz31704/18/12

GOOD MINGLING OF SPECIES

put the alpha out front and see what occurs. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by StarMAP04/18/12

I'm really glad u brought this back

The strain on their relationship shocked me! They are so perfect for each other but I guess it makes sense. I hope Micah and the coven can really help Parker.

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by katgoddess105/27/12

Oh yeah, there's more!

I love the relationship between Parker and Micah. There is obvious love between them, even though they are still working things out. What happened between Parker and the woman in white was confusing. Why didn't she just speak English and why didn't Parker tell Micah about what happened?

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