All Comments on 'A Small Town, A Perfect Girl'

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solecismsolecismabout 12 years ago
Great!

I would've liked it to be a little longer, and have a little more context. However, the pacing was nicely consistent and the writing was both believable and sexy. Really good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
very nice :)

Gave me some inspiration for later, thanks so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great

That guy would get my vote for 'the dumbest guy in human history' if he lets that girl get away

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good one

Only a total idiot would let that girl go

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