Poorly written. A good start, as a ROUGH draft. You really need to use less abbreviations, and decide on a name for the woman ( Neela or Neelu). Also, too much use of parentheses. It needs work!
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A rough draft
Poorly written. A good start, as a ROUGH draft. You really need to use less abbreviations, and decide on a name for the woman ( Neela or Neelu). Also, too much use of parentheses. It needs work!
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