Cupid's Sophomore Year, Semester 01

They better get their HEA after 17 pages

Before I read 17 pages I just want to say if they dont get their HEA I am going to make a voodoo doll out of you and do stuff to it.
PS I love your writing and your style and thanks for sharing

Fabulous!

I'm so glad you gave Josh his own story! What a great story it is, too!
I hope there will be lots more chapters after this one!

DAMN!!
That was just so beautiful!
I loved it!
I think its awesome how you have cross overs in all your stories.
Keep it up!!
Can't wait to read the next one.
:)

Thank you!

After reading several of your other stories, I saw this one and finished it in one setting. Just know...you have really have entertained us with a story that is readable, characters who are loveable, funny and endearing. As all good authors should, we, your readers, found parts with which to identify, characters to embrace, friends we would cherish and wit to make us giggle and laugh. All in all, a heartfelt... thank you!
Looking forward to further adventures!

I love this! After waiting so long for your next installment, it couldn't be better. And I absolutely love Joshs character; he had me laughing out loud on several occasions. Love that you incorporate all of your stories together. Don't make us wait too long next time!

wew

You Sir, are genius !!

I'm in LOVE.....with the twins ( yes I mean them both )

PLZE , PLZE , PLZE , PLZE , PLZE , give the twins their own story , I would love to read more about them just as much as I want to read more about Josh......oh yea love the story PLZE hurry with next story

Nestor and Bryce

My 2 favorite characters on Lit. I hope you give them their own story. It would be funny reading their road to love tale. Full of thongs, washboard abs and everything a princess needs in a man.

Oh My God!

Imagine my surprise when I saw your new story. You could have knocked me down with a feather! I was so disappointed when I saw it was chapter 1, thinking about the looong wait for the next one ( yes you have been q bit tardy ). BUT, I cheered when I saw 17 pages, wowzee!. I loved all of the characters you've created, but Josh is the absolute best! Clark a close 2nd for the sweetness factor alone. I almost fell of my chair a couple of times, the footlong, the kissing scene with Mitch( everyone hates sloppy kissers, who let you breathe, honest! ), the cluck clucks & the thanks giving turkey skin out tutorial. All these scenes were such a riot. The Nestor & Bryce scene was perfect for the finale. Love it love it.

Strange bug in the site won't allow me to sign on with my lit profile via iphone, hence the anon comment.

Fridayschild, aka, Nithya

Big hunk o' story!

Thanks for the 17 pages of drama and laughter. Because I am a perv, I admit I was sad we didn't get to find out how much of Dig fit into Josh. :0) I agree with the commenter who said Nestor and Bryce were the perfect way to end the story. I LOL'ed at how not even a go-go boy passed Josh's devastated lips ...

I love your writing. You are the perfect mix of humor and sex. I can't wait for chapter two.

Excellent

You've done it again. Another fantastic story.

hilarious

A little bit of drama, great sense of humour, and flavored with sex. Really good.
i would love to know more about Seth

woahh!

OK you had me very worried about half way through and i was thinking of ways to torture you if Josh was once again left out in the cold. Thanks goodness you gave him his HEA :-) I laughed so loudly in places that the doggies were startled. You are a genius in both the dialogue and the story line. Sincere thanks for sharing your brilliance with us.

Respect from Jhb, SA
FBG

Great work

Your writing is wonderfully descriptive, loved it! Would've loved a proper sex scene with Josh taking that long cock though... or did I miss something???

The best

Thank you for giving Josh a HEA. He and Clark make a nice couple. You have a real knack at combining drama, comedy and sexy. An added plus was sticking in characters we've come to love (Calvin and Reese, Pete and Josh- especially with how they're ok, Nestor and Bryce and Aunt Emily). Seriously, if you aren't publishing for money you should think about it.

Reading this brightened my whole afternoon.

AWSOME..... :)

Your stories are the best. Can't wait to read what in store for Joah & Clark. Nice to see Bryce & Nestor are well & kickin'(please write more about them LOL)!

P.S. Love Aunt Emily too!

sooo....

actually I wanted to call it an early night because I have lots of things to do tomorrow but then I stumbled over this story and just couldn't stop reading and now it's 2:40 am and shit---- but, well... this story was worth my lack of sleep

oh, and btw: I love your style and your writing in general.

MORE!!!!

so can't wait for you to post part 2. really want to find out what happens with clarks family! I LOVE YOUR STORIES

Tender, romantic and just so funny!

Josh is such a loveable character that you've created, imbued with heart and so much humour. I've been laughing throughout the read but I have to say the "cluck, cluck, cluck" elicited the best belly laugh. Then the poignancy in the final pages of your writing for Clark while still so humorous just says to me what a wonderful writer and storyteller you are xaviermayne. Thankyou for this read and for the others on this site.

So happy to see anew story from you!

I absolutely love your writing and can't wait for the next chapter. I'm worried for Clark--I don't want his family to be asshats. Please don't keep us waiting too long!

Damn.

You realize you're one of only two authors on this site that can get my lazy ass to comment? And of course I gave you five stars.

Great story!

Thanks for continuing Josh's story, please an awesome foursome with Calvin and Reese at some point.

I like!

I've reread thIs story four times already. I love it and can't wait for the rest of it.

More, more more! lol

Wait, where's the rest??? Is that it?????

This was a fantastic sequel to the first "Cupid" story Xavier! :) It was so funny and poignant, and funny and hot and funny. lol There were so many parts that I found myself just hysterical over. What a sense of humor Josh has! Omg....

I hope you continue this story; I'd love to read more about the twins, Seth, Mitchell (whatever happened to him?), Sky.....but especially the twins: "two helpings of hunk, served hot." lol

Lisa

:)

Gives me hope

Awesome!!!!!!!!

I read it again today. Crying and laughing all in one chapter. Please do a story for Bryce and Nestor. They are deserving of two hunks that sweep them of their feet and be their knights in shining armour. Thank you again.

You're writing again!

*squee* It's almost embarrassing to go all fangirl on you, but this is awesome! I love that you continued writing about Josh a d Calvin and Reese. And I love how you weave your worlds together. My favourite side characters from Frat House Troopers (which I reread today) making an appearance here is just great!

You are a fantastic writer!

I felt like I was right there!(I would have loved to be Andrea!) Josh and Clark are great together. Would have loved to hear a little on how Clark's long one was used better. Your words just flow...I loved it. Thank you!

Excellent

Really loved it and so glad Josh is getting rewarded for being Cupid. I normally dislike very long chapters, but I could not stop reading. Thank you.

Additional Comment

Forgot to mention one thing. I'm not sure if you plan to continue this (the title sort of indicates it's a possibility), but I would like to have found out how Clark's coming out was received by his family.

One of your best

This was great. You're always good with characterizations and even your minor characters feel real and fleshed out. Your crazy porn plots even seem plausible the way you write them (pervy Josh getting a towel boy job--awesome, guy with a huge dick as the impetus for a relationship), somehow you make it all work and sweep the reader along with you for the ride. Loved the cameo from Bryce and Nestor. So glad to see another story from you. I'd love to see another!

2nd semester

You can't leave it like this. You're too good a writer, and he storyline reads seamlessly. I've just read all your stories one after another after another and was soo disappointed that it came to a stop. Please write more very soon!

Holy schnikies.
You are wonderful, and should always commit your spare time-- hell all your time-- to writing. I was sorely disappointed after the first story I read to see that there were only a few more. Having finished this, that leaves one. I sincerely hope you continue writing, as they are such a joy to read.

amazing, truly amazing

I have read this story it feels like a million times. You are a rare gem of an author. You blend just the right amount of humor to keep me on my toes. :) I'm so glad that you are publishing. Congratulations! I hope you continue Clark n Josh's story. Its one of my favorites. Not that I don't like all of your stories, I definately do. I could only wish to write like you, however my art is in a different area. I have just started following your blog, and am one of the fangirls you recently talked about. Keep up the work of genuine amazing you do. I'm keeping my eyes open for chapter 2. Thank you for your writing and being able to inspire the people who read your stories. You are a teacher in ever sense of the word. Thank you, thank you, thank you. Ok I'm done. ;)

I love this story...Josh's humor made it perfect. I'm so glad he found his love, and I can only guess he and Clark will have a good life together.

love it

i think im in love with clark...lol...

Love

I love this please write more . :)

damn. thanks!
best writing I've seen on this site.

Gifted

You are an amazing writer. Your story had be from the beginning. I can't wait to read your other stories and I seconf the whole being inlobe woth Clark. But would have loved to here more of Seth.

Oh. My. God.

I absolutely LOVE Josh's sense of humor. This was wonderful.

Truly impressive

Absolutely wonderful, regardless of genre. I laughed, I cried, I yearned.

If you're not a professional: you should be.

Gooooood story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A must read story filled with a lot of erocism, feelings n what not?
Im expecting to read the next chapter of this story sooon.

Awesooome stufff!!!!!!

Sir what happnd to seth. Waiting to read about seducin seth... Is it in 2nd semester?????

Moooooooooore!!!!!!!

I love love love this story, I love how you werent straight to the point like a lot of storys are. You kept me guessing wondering who josh was going to end up with, and how everything led up to him meeting clark. This is honestly a greet story and I can wait till the next chapter comes out. And I know your the writer and I trust your judgement and you can di what ever you want, but I do hope things go well with clark and his family when he tells them bout Josh. And lastly I say yes to the foursome, I think it would be a nice relationship between all four of them not to mention HOT!!!!


I would also like it if you commented to us to let us know if your planing on writing another chapter or not. I know for some writers it takes a long time for them to write a new chapter, and some things might get in your way of completing it. But would be nice if you could give us a sign that your still working thats all. Again an amazing stroy and would love to read more, ty!!! :)

omg!

i love this story! it really gets your mind (and dick) going! please keep making more! you have convinced me to join this strange site! i love you man!

great story!!

I can not wait until the next semester is out!!!

It was one of those "can not put this book down" type stories! I stayed up until 4 am on my school night (In college) to finish it, and now I'm on the edge waiting to know what happens.

"The last thing I feel before the lights go out is his long finger mashing on my prostate like it's the doorbell to the whorehouse."

I had to take a 10 minute rest after that bit, I laughed so hard... :D Absolutely love this story, it's simply great! Amusing, entertaining, easy to follow, with great characters you can bond with.

MORE

I love all of your stories! Pages and pages of goodness. You need to post moreee! :D