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A Lady and the Student Ch. 04

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/24/12

You keep talking about how intelligent they were and how stupid they are now, like it's a prize.

Are you that intimidated by an educated, intelligent woman? Do you suffer from inadequacies when you compare successful and competent women? Are you a little boy in the presence of a self confident, determined woman? C

I only ask because your story is so fucking retarded that if if you are anything like the central character, then you truely are a sad, pathetic individual.

Keep in mind the obvious. What happens when he does get bored? What happens as the women get older (and they will)? What happens when they are 50 or 60 or even 70? Is he still going to be looking after them? When dementia sets in, or he has to change their diaper or they develop cancer? Is he going to be there for them? Will he still look after them?

So take your lame ass story and shove It up your rooty toot, candy ass, you lazy cocksucker. This story is the main reason why you can't get laid.

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by StoryTeller0704/24/12

Mr. Angry

You really shouldn't get so upset over fictional characters and situations. Thanks for commenting, as it gives me inspiration from having reached someone so deeply.

Hope you are so deeply moved by the next chapter. I like to explore the characters motives and reactions when subjected to an unusual (and yes, a ridiculous) situation. Being a well balanced individual I understand it is just a story, yet I do like to write a happy ending, eventually. The story is written to make readers think, as well as enhance their love life. It is not for everyone of course. We are all individuals and want different things in life. In fantasy one can be cruel and callous and aim to please ones self, and at the same time, in real life, be a caring spouse and parent.

Have you ever thought about murder stories? Is the writer a murderer, or are they promoting murder as the solution to a problem?

Don't worry, I will look after the women when they get old, though I think they will learn to, not only cope, but take over the situation to their benefit.

The reason for making an important business woman, or professor the central character is to make it all the more dramatic when they fall prey to thier foibles, inner needs, or someone elses. It is all the more interesting for a poor person to have the upper hand over a rich person, for a change. Once they become the 'loser', becoming down-trodden, they then gain my sympathy to become free, and stronger from their terrible experiences.

Hope this makes you feel better. If not then I'm guessing you just wanted a rant, or a wind-up. Keep reading, thats why I write, Gary

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by Anonymous09/12/12

awesome

Really great story here can't wait for more. To the angry chick below do you have some sort of mental retardation that keeps you from knowing the difference from reality and fiction? I'm sure the author if just like the Guy in this story with a cabinet full of magical hypnosis drugs and a harem of slaves lol. Get a life idiot.

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by StoryTeller0709/12/12

Magic Potions

Don't need them to keep a harem, though they can't be called girls. For one they are mature women, and two they would hit me. They are easily kept in line by being treated like a woman should be, with consideration, respect, and lots of wild fantasy stories before and during foreplay. Its easy really, though my jaw and fingers ache.

Just lay back and enjoy the story!

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by missy233410/14/12

next chapter please

I'm enjoying your stories, is there another chapter to this one?

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by Anonymous03/01/13

continue

This is a great story so for please continue it

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by DesireeFox05/29/13

it was fun but

was thinking maybe Candy could over come the MC and give him a taste of the drug in return

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by Anonymous10/15/16

This is seriously creepy - and that is not a compliment!

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