No Way _ Kim

Excellent!

Nice slight-of-hand. Well done!

WOT?

I thought you were British, just kidding . Well done!

Great Read

One of my favorites that you have penned.Thanks

Fun To Read

Nice.

Good One

Scared me for a moment when it looked like Kim was considering it. Well done. Enjoyed it. Liked the resolution to the problem and the ending.

REMEMBERING ONES VOWS

no matter the cost, serendipity may happen, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well done my friend.

Yes I know I actually read one of your stories, I admit it's the first one for a long time. But I did look at that email you sent me and it appears you have read one or two of my stories lately. So being the fair minded person I am(:-)) I read this one, and yes I am glad I did. Thanks for writing.

GREAT!

Thanks!!!

way to go

Welcome back. I love dry wit and no one does it better than the Brit.
I gave this ***** and an LOL.

Glad to see your submission again.

Good, light read - and, to the point with a twist. Well done and get back to writing so you can keep those of us that can't write entertained.

Nice

A feel good story.

it's about fucking time

welcome back. 5+

Superb

Simple, effective, well told. A True Loving Wife!!! Amazing how a little miscommunication can turn a safe situation into an almost major issue.
Would love to read more of these types of stories.
Well done Britease well done!!!
Thank you
M1

Welcome back,

Nice twist to the story, especially in this genre. I along with others thought Kim would stray to the dark side.

Thanks for the story. I know retirement is a hard job, I've been working at it for three years. Don't worry it becomes easier.

Woodmanone

Fun story

Clever flash-story, Britease.

Smart.

A good bit of writing and worth more than the five stars I was able to give.
Smart and to the point - in a round about way!

What there was : was good !

I'll just have to reread your older stories until Chelsea gives your team what-for. You should be completely available, post retirement ,after the Arsenal get doubley drubbed !

Good One

Short, to the point and an enjoyable read. Now that you are retired maybe you can spend a lot more time on the important work of keeping us entertained.

Sweet!

Concise, and even a bit humorous. I like Kim!

Maybe my mind just works in weird ways, but....So, if Gerald always only books ONE suite, what if there had been no Kim? Would Gerald have shared a bed with either Mike or Frank? Demand sexual favors from them?! Wouldn't THAT have been a funny twist...

Nice flash story.

wow a britease man that's not wimpy

and a wife that's not a slut.....great story 5 stars

Nice

A wife who refuses to cheat on her husband, no matter what. I wish I married someone like that.


HA

I just cannot believe it....Arsenal!!

Say goodbye to a whole fucking star Brit. 4*

Carefree etc.;o)

Always enough your little twists, Britease.

You never disappoint.

Mousse9

That's a good point ,would this guy start smoken sausage? would he be a peter pufen fag ?Would this guy get down on his kenes and start sucking guys dick?

Good!!!

Come back story. Thanks for sharing.

Welcome back!

Britease,

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


x

Five Stars!

Need I say more?

Oh great now what!

I got the fire started, the pitchforks sharped, and the villagers all whipped into a frenzy. I look over and see the wacc branding iron is glowing red. Now you go and pull it out, thanks a lot. Dang it. Oh great story. Loved the twist.
I know! Where is that goodhubby gal? Those branding irons will still get some use!

(By the way if you keep throwing all those red herrings you may just teach some of these people to write better)

Missed you.

Welcome back. Five stars.
Best,
M

Let Down

I don't mind the twist but you could at least have rewarded readers with hot funky married sex

Great Work

Wonderful twist. I thought this was usual story of husband and wife drooling for promotion. Great story. Loved it even though it was without a hint of hardcore sex.

welcome back

Thanks for the entertainment. Mike from Texas

Yes

One of your shorter ones but very well done. Keep them coming

Short, sweet, funny as hell

Nice work. Now that is a a LOVING wife. The revenge against her boss was perfect, kneed in the balls and a big payout.

Good flash story.

And with a true loving wife in it.

5 stars

TLW story, thank you. The first is the communication in the marriage. If Radk's story the "Nuclear Response", the wife tells everything to her husband,there is not mass murder..........

Nicely done

Well written and with a surprise twist or a least I thought it to be, for her husband to man up to the situation of his wife's boss wanting to fuck her.

I thought at first he would complain a bit and then tell her to go for it

Thanks for the read..

A good story...really different.

I liked this. It was a story about a loving wife...you know, one of those rare types that really loves her husband.

But PLEEEEZE, can we get away from that damn cliche "Life is good"?

Loved it!

Decent tale. Good to see a wife with some sense in her head.

Fantastic story expertly presented and fun as well.

The story could've gone in so many directions. You sandbagged me in the end. You have an incredible tongue in cheek style that looms out there in a vacuum of incredible drama or potential drama and then neatly tie up the ends. Thank you for your offering.

Well Done!

Nice to see a LW story where the wife isn't clueless, self-centered or just a slut!

WATCH YOUR Ps & Qs

and don't forget Xs as in harassment. TK U MLJ LV NV

Wrong category

It's in the wrong category. Don't you know that Loving Wives aren't allowed into the category of loving wives! A faithful and loving wife has no place here! Loving Wives is reserved for faithless, hateful and self-centred sluts, and spinless caricatures of men, so maybe try another category, Non Human, perhaps. After all, it's traditional to put a story in a category that has nothing to do with the story!

Come on.

Actually I found it refreshing. I love the faithful wife. I have one and I love her to death.
If she ever cheated I would be gone in a heartbeat. No questions no answers, just gone. I know she knows. It is how I was raised.

Second time through...

Thanks for the offering.