How does Missy work through her problem? Do she, her mother and father go to see Liz or does Justin and his mom try to help?
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Anonymous04/12/14
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I've read all the chapters in this series. I find little eroticism in here. It is a story of unhappiness, and almost rape. Trish doesn't really acknowledge desire and Love as a woman for her son. She simply gives in to sexual urges. This is not the same as love. All sex acts described in this series are, at the very least, reluctant. The son is more than happy to simply 'take' his mother despite her pleas for him to desist and he is wishing to 'take' Missy even though her sexual troubles are tearing her and possibly her family apart. And HE is not the one inhabited by the spirit. He does this with free will. I do not comment on stories I haven't read, so I read it, and now I know I don't want to read anymore of your work.
English
Maybe one more chapter?
How does Missy work through her problem? Do she, her mother and father go to see Liz or does Justin and his mom try to help?
no
I've read all the chapters in this series. I find little eroticism in here. It is a story of unhappiness, and almost rape. Trish doesn't really acknowledge desire and Love as a woman for her son. She simply gives in to sexual urges. This is not the same as love. All sex acts described in this series are, at the very least, reluctant. The son is more than happy to simply 'take' his mother despite her pleas for him to desist and he is wishing to 'take' Missy even though her sexual troubles are tearing her and possibly her family apart. And HE is not the one inhabited by the spirit. He does this with free will. I do not comment on stories I haven't read, so I read it, and now I know I don't want to read anymore of your work.
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