Too Clever by a Mile Ch. 04

Creepy

This series started well but it's turning too creepy.

Great read

This is turning out better then I could have ever imagined! Next please.

Has turned creepy, won't read any more

Nice

Brilliant story, but I admit I know and care very little for this bondage stuff. I also know that stuff can seriously fuck people up if you get it wrong, so I hope we've seen the last of it. It simply doesn't match the characters of this story.

Still, I want to read more. I'm liking this story very much (5 stars worth) and I'd like to see where it goes.

From the author

How can you call this creepy? Doesn't everybody chain up their girlfriends and leave them outside over night? Look, I live in the USA! In Oklahoma its OK if a man wants to beat his wife. In Colorado If a wife catches her husband in bed with another woman she can file for divorce, but if a husband catches his wife with another man he can shoot her on the spot. I live in a creepy country I guess. Heck we invaded Iraq, killed 100,00 people, and we can't understand why they might not like like us. This is a love story, but it's in an erotic web site. What do you think is going to happen? There will be no pedophilia nor will there be any bestiality, but rest assured, everything else, except homicide and dismemberment, is on the table. It has a happy ending. Cathy gets even in her own way. Carvohi

This is way creepy. This should not be in a romance category. There is nothing romantic about it. Its gross in fact.

Hey author

I like the way you think!! LOL

Hey Carvohi, keep going man! Nothing wrong with the light bondage between 2 lovers that you depicted earlier in the story. Hell its nothing wrong with the heavy bondage when its consensual. Of course it wasn't here in the story but u can understand what was going on in his mind when he did it. He did overstep, but it sounds like it will be fixed later. It is hard to stay with a girl when you find out what he did about her. We've got a classic logic vs feelings battle going on here in our hero. I might have gone with the logical answer and left her a while ago, but that is in real life. Sounds like in our story that might have been the wrong decision. Keep going brother!

It is creepy

This story is in the Romance category which is wrong. It should be in BDSM.

horrible

Is this your idea of romance? i wouldn't be surprised to find in the next chapter that he'll cut her feet off.Most probably you will justfy it with something like " he loved her so he wanted her always next to him". But guess what, enough is enough, I will not read another chapter....or another of your stories.

Oh Boy!

Boy, does this author make a man think. This chapter came out of left field. Both of these individuals, whom I was growing fond of, are turning into very flawed individuals. He for his torture (yes, it was torture) and her for accepting it. If I was her I would run far and fast away from him. I understand the conflict regarding their meeting and what was happening but talk about handling it wrong. Bad enough she accepted the maid gambit, but this is going over-the-top. I am in a wait-and-see mode and am going to read the next chapter hoping it gets back to romance.

As usual something well done.

I admit that I did not expect this. Really he fully qualifies as evil through his acts.
His motivation may different from that of many sadists, but when you start dancing close to the edge you can fall in.

sick

I liked a lot of the stories, this author has written but this is really going the sick way. My girlfriend or wife wouldn't beg me to forgive her or love her if I treat her like this. She would probably just kick me out on my ass. The author is a raving sadistic and stupid monster in this story. He has disgraced the idea of a strong woman. Unlike him, most of us dislike slaves or mice. Shameful. All women aren't flat chested , short ht. bdsm loving ,brown haired slaves

Disgusting.

I lost all respect for Steve in this chapter.

I only want to see him get his fucking bitch ass beat.