How Wonderful to Know

:D

that whore and the loser deserve each other. The former husband may not the man he was, but what the hell in getting revenge!! when opportunity serves it on your plate.

A smile

A smile started on the fifth paragraph and continued to the end. Papa Toad and HDK would have been proud. A hole in one (page, that is).

Ha

Now that is a revenge story

gave it a five

it made me chuckle

I like it...

So simple, and so just.

HA

HA HA HA
The cheating wife became a cheating wife again, only now for money and her new husbands approval. HILARIOUS

HA HA HA

bingo

fitting revenge

another laugh

i will keep this one for funny times. got a5.

serves her right

I can just imagine him going to his computer, after they leave, and check his investment portfolio and mention that a stock has split and he is now a millionaire. Ha ha ha

Don't know why.....

Jed's bitching, they could always say no. I guess the money's just that much more important! Personally, I would rather work two or three extra jobs than become my ex's whore. And I would kick the ass of any man who would want me to whore myself out!

Yes. This was good!

dd,

Great and well written. Oh, betrayedbylove, less money...

Thanks for sharing on Lit.


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read a longer version of this

same idea by another author, Creamer I think. This was perfect for the 'low information' types living in the comment section though, their attention spans are akin to those of a fruit fly.

Anon

Anon you read this, right! Um and your attention span is?

Funny revenge

My ex wife the whore and her boy toy has to watch. Too funny.

Wow

I like it!!!!!!

Good one

Funny payback.

REVENGE AND PAYBACK IN SECRET

benefits no one except sadists. TK U MLJ LV NV

no way a nonce like Random

ever read this, his claim to fame is voting and commenting without reading. specious little bitch dog humping the leg of irrelevance. yip yip noncey!

Perfect justice

There was no payback in secret. It was done blow-by-blow (pun intended) within earshot... and reach, if he was so inclined... of the new hubby.

No, this was perfect justice, not just revenge, because in this 'funny little flash story' it shines the light of truth over each character:
...ex-hubby is actually human and not so perfect that he can dish it out too,
...new hubby is a sneaky, underhanded bastard who STOLE the nice fantasy that was the ex-hubby's life: he had taken his money, wife and future he'd been building, and deserved anything that had happened to him
...the wife obviously cared little for the ex. She can be seduced easily. She values money over relationships (as does the new guy). So actually, having the truth about the wife, the new guy did him a favor and showed her in her true colors.

I bet my life that he'll get a visit from the wife again, because the new guy was always a pimp looking for an easy buck and easy fuck, and the wife was always just a whore.

Interestingly, wife might lose all respect for the new guy, in which case she'll be back to get her brains fucked out and make easy money herself.

:)

The anon queer is still here. British much? That would explain it.

Mission accomplished

Funny and twisted flash story.

Double D does us proud.

Few writers have the skill at setting a scene and closing it as quickly and enjoyably as the Dead One. His flash revenge stories are always short and very sweet. Well done, Double D!

The neighbor?

Great read - but what about the poor neighbor who now has to deal with a lowered income? I know she's an off-stage character, but the story is so well written that I can't help but feel for her.

Go easy on Random

His whole "Wannabe Cuck" thing didn't pan out well; the closet cucks or whatever they are called sort of took over. He feels guilt because saying in comments "I didn't read it but it sucked and I voted 1*" cast a shitty glow on the WBC thing. Give the kid a break.

Nice touch

Nice story of a little payback..someone complained abou t the neighbor losing her income, but just because he told his ex about a neighbor, did wasn't necessarily true. Good read!

Awesome.

Where you been man? Can you please get back to writing some new stuff?!?! You need to post more!!!!

This one was one of my favourites.

not gonna go easy on

that shitsack Random - anyone who shits on stories and declares 'i didn't read it but i hated it and voted 1' is a gutless little fuck and no way i'm gonna go easy on a cancer to a story site. if you're not gonna read it then don't flame it and downvote it unless you are a dirty stinkin pile o' shit like Random. that is all.

You know....

I do not think I have ever voted one without reading. I have used the comment section to piss off you worthless fucks who attack others for no reason. Mousee9 is a perfect example. He has never said anything bad about anyone else in the sense that you have. And yet one of you stupid queers called him jizzy for making a legitimate comment on one of the stories. That is the point that I joined the fray and called one of you a cocksucker. Probably true. That is the same reason I give the swingers hell, they think their opinion is the only one that matters. You bastards are in the minority. I am still waiting for the ass whipping that one of you promised. I am also still waiting for for the superman who said he was going to shove one of my favorite pistols up my ass. Don't talk, DO! Follow my IP adress to my front door and and fucking do it. I suspect I will die of old age before one of you weak willed shits gathers the courage to do it.

Random in a lather?

I read the comment you made flaming a story without reading it. That makes you a worthless sack of excrement. Chickenshit cocksmokers like you never submit a story but have the nerve to flame a story and say you never read it. Not sure what the hell you are talking about IP address but just post your real name and street address and I'm sure someone will visit you soon limp wrist.

RandomHardoninSouthCuckolina!

Careful, that guy is a bad mofo - don't bend over in the shower, he'll try to stick his little pecker in yer cornhole! If he gets yer address he'll show up at yer door with a tub o' vaseline and a smile! Considerin them proclivities he oughta be called Rabid Homo in Search of Cock!

Hmmm. nice twist - wish all ex-wives were so complacent....

However the urge to "not" squeeze the windpipe shut of the slut would be a challenge.

Better then some longer stories I've read recently

Sometimes less is more. I can color in the lines myself.

Nice flash story

That next door widow lady had me worried too, until one of our colleagues decided that she never existed. Still, it is quite probable that he is lying through his teeth and that he has more sex money stashed away. We may end up with double the number of words in the comments, as there were in the story itself.... TY

Great story.

Nice trick on revenge sex. And considering she got half his business for 1.3 mill....it stands to reason that he has at least that much socked away.

Maybe next time he'll blow a nut on her face before sending her back.

amazing

very enjoyable

Like the concept and execution, but Sandy is not discounted, for wear and tear? Cheap alcohol, to accompany the present value.

Ha, Ha, Ha, Good humorous story

I like papatoad's stories, but he has many longer stories as well.
This story is a good modern Figaro type humorous revenge story. 5 stars.
BTW I almost fell off of my chair because of laughing! Ha, Ha, Ha,Ha

Well, I take it back

Don't go easy on Random, when he started yapping about "sticking a pistol up his ass" and "dying of old aids" it became clear he is far worse off than we thought, beyond help really. I guess he didn't learn his lesson last time when he had to eat his words then shut his piehole.

Well done.

The Willing cucks hate this story and apparently have no sense of humour. So well done for this story. I will apologise in advance for the comments that will be directed towards me and others that like this story for what it is, I wonder which readers will get a hook caught in their mouth from the line I just cast? Personally I thought this story was very good and poked fun at certain stories that really should have thier own category. Anyway well done and thanks for the story.

Willing cucks do hate this story

Closet cucks love it though! Nice to see so many of them out; out and about that is, not out of the closet. God forbid those pencil dicks step out of the safety of their little closets, some big bad man might scare the piss out of them.

Thanks

For sharing.

Not Exactly A "Feel-Good" Story Any Way You Look At It

Did not give me a warm, fuzzy feeling.

Fantastic!

After 2000 year we can laugh on the cheating wives and the lover boys!!!!!!!!!!!

The cuckolder got cucked. Loved the concept. Still laughing at the whisky jibe.

Anyone know any other stories that follow this theme?

5* for making me laugh, though I'd normally rate this a 3 or 4, as it's a flash. Thanks for writing.

@ witles I read a revenge story where the exhusband shoot on DVD the sex with the exwife and he sent to the new husband as a part of his revenge. I forgot the Author and the title.
However this story is better.

Hey, thanks Duna.

Mail me if you remember the name of the story.

Agree with Vestspet

At the end, we should find out Hubby1 is still very wealthy, he's just fucking with them on his lowball whore-price. I also like the special whisky shopping! Heaven Hill would work!

:}

:]

#2 CUCKING THE CUCK

and in your face. TK U MLJ LV NV

Second Comment

Once a cheater now a whore. Except the price has dropped.

HA