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Mourning Night

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by tazz31704/18/12

ASKING FOR THE IMPROBABLE

to keep the lust aroused. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tzara04/18/12

There's a wistfulness about this poem

that's quite elegant, Neo. Very nice tone--a little sad, a little resigned, but resolved. It reminds me a little of the bedroom scene in Romeo and Juliet, though the circumstances there were different--but the sense of a lingering doom overshadowing things is similar. Nicely done.

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