He's Got them Both

Whew!!

Hot as hot can be! I was hard the whole prom and afterwards,too!

oh hell yes lol

good job. One of the hottest, if not hottest 1 pg stories I've ever read. ty

if one is good...

...two must be better. hot story.

Fucking hot

This is a great story,, good writing,,, there is plenty of room for ch 2
Barry's paerents don't seem to be around,,, you could make it real interesting with the 5 of them

Great Story

Hope you add to this one. Really enjoyed it. Thanks.

Wow

You've outdone yourself Brett; your stories are always hot, this is in the "hottest" category. Thanks.

Hot hot hot

So fucking hot, wanked myself stupid, wishing it were me fucking and sucking these two red hot cunts. Made up for it later when my girlfriend and her best friend acted out this story with me. We are going to repeat doing so as often as we can manage it, we may even get their mothers to join in. More and more of this please and soon

WOW!!!!!!

Please do a follow up to this. This is one of the best stories I have ever read.

N eighbours

It must be fantastic living next to a hot mother and daughter when you can have a fuck any time.

Good story..

Really hot. I have to wonder how this three way affair could last so long with no one falling in love. I feel it leave the reader a bit cold. IMHO.

Nice

Good job i enjoyed the story.

Fun

A fun, entertaining story. Good work.

...after reading so many of Brettj's stories, I've come to realise he has a Pepsi fetish, hehehe ;). ....now how in the world you could want to drink Pepsi instead of cold water after fucking yourself into dehydration is beyond me! Heh;)