Intoxicated by Her Beauty

Very nice

Wonderful tale of two needing one another. Loved the characters.
Hopefully you will write more.

Very nice.

A well done short story. I was drawn into it and instantly became hard. Enjoyable reading.

not to bad hope you do more of this one .

Good start

Good start, very predictable, if you would have continued the story longer it would have been better, but for a short story it was good.

I gave you a "first timer's five", but...

I think it was bit short. Take your time and tell us the whole story when you submit another one.

Nice

In my life its my step daughter, she is absolutely beautiful, long hair, nice breasts and the most beautiful ass I have seen, I can only dream of how good it would be to give her oral pleasure. I had a nice picture of her in a two piece bathing suit but alas I lost it when my hard drive crashed. I look at her wedding pictures and any others I can find and dream about being able to love her the way I would like to. I got hard reading your story hope you continue this.

Enjoyed

The title attracted me. I found the story enjoyable and glad i read it

Very nice story

Very believable. It's amazing how many father-daughter relationships there are, the majority of which remain anonymous. My twin sister and I began at a very early age with our Daddy and have never looked back or regretted anything. Provided fathers are not apes or rapists, the relationship can be mutually rewarding. Five stars, two thumbs up.

It was a pretty good story! She may not be too happy with him later for getting baby oil up inside her.