An Anticlimactic Ending! (Pardon the expression,please.)
I was very disappointed in the way the saga ended! I was sure we'd see David joining in on the action,maybe even taking it up the ass from Trey. Bullets and blood?Very unsatisfying!
If death was what was desired perhaps ,in keeping with the "flow" of the story,maybe all the "well-endowed" characters could have gathered together.Let's see,there was Trey,of course,and Carl,Manny,Al,Bob,Ken,the cleaning dudes.The 3 guys at the resort.Who am I leaving out? Anywho,they all could have gathered with the express purpose of gangbanging Clare. While they were waiting for Clare to return,they all sat together for a big circle-jerk. As ,Clare,David,and Lynn enter the room,(Fuck that bullshit scene with Lynn,Terry,and the Head Mistress at the Academy!), all of the guys explode together,firing oddles of cum everywhere. When the cops finally show up,they learn that everyone has suffocated in a deluge of cum! ~ Hey,it's better than the way walterio ended the story!
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ok not bad
not a bad story but somm editing is needed.
Epic
Epic ending
An Anticlimactic Ending! (Pardon the expression,please.)
I was very disappointed in the way the saga ended! I was sure we'd see David joining in on the action,maybe even taking it up the ass from Trey. Bullets and blood?Very unsatisfying!
If death was what was desired perhaps ,in keeping with the "flow" of the story,maybe all the "well-endowed" characters could have gathered together.Let's see,there was Trey,of course,and Carl,Manny,Al,Bob,Ken,the cleaning dudes.The 3 guys at the resort.Who am I leaving out? Anywho,they all could have gathered with the express purpose of gangbanging Clare. While they were waiting for Clare to return,they all sat together for a big circle-jerk. As ,Clare,David,and Lynn enter the room,(Fuck that bullshit scene with Lynn,Terry,and the Head Mistress at the Academy!), all of the guys explode together,firing oddles of cum everywhere. When the cops finally show up,they learn that everyone has suffocated in a deluge of cum! ~ Hey,it's better than the way walterio ended the story!
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