All Comments on 'Affair of the Heart Ch. 14'

You think this is erotic writing? stringing sentences together about sexual acts does not make an erotic story. But it is your fantasy I would guess you live this lifestyle or want. A swinging lifestyle is not to tried lightly, tread carefully.

Hi Blue Jersey,

I waited until I had finished the story before commenting. I had a wonderful time reading it and as it progressed my interest grew with it. The trouble with many commentators is that they lose sight of the fact that all this is fantasy! I suspect they probably share much of that fantasy and they feel a bit guilty so load it off on you. You have a way of getting and holding attention. Write more- MUCH more.

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