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From Slave to Sovereign Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by SweetGasps05/06/12

I'm not one for reading fan-fics...

But this I really, really liked. Please continue! Develop the story more. Give it more backgroud, length, character story, etc.

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by Anonymous06/09/12

Aweseome!

I second what the first reviewer said. :)

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by Anonymous07/22/12

OMG!!!

Please don't stop!
*if you know what I mean* ;)

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