This story becomes more stupid as it unfolds. S&M is not appreciated
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Anonymous04/25/12
Creepy is as creepy does.
This is still odd. I read your defense after the last one but the first two pages of this one were no better - worse if anything. It it hat been classified under Fetish it would have been more accurate. One more chance from me based on your past stuff that I thought was good
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Anonymous05/16/12
This is no Romance
by
Anonymous07/25/16
Steve would be a dead man.
Still written well but I would break every bone in the hand he hit me with.
English
Strange "Romance"
This story becomes more stupid as it unfolds. S&M is not appreciated
Creepy is as creepy does.
This is still odd. I read your defense after the last one but the first two pages of this one were no better - worse if anything. It it hat been classified under Fetish it would have been more accurate. One more chance from me based on your past stuff that I thought was good
This is no Romance
Steve would be a dead man.
Still written well but I would break every bone in the hand he hit me with.
Steve is a piece of shit.
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