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by Anonymous04/26/12

and what is the outcome from the demonic encounter?

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by StevenBlack08/09/12

Is it too open ended?

Hmnnn,

I had assumed that the demon's last statement would have summed it up.

"There. Now you know the punishment for defiling my sacred space." It said as it stood over them gloating at their corpse-like bodies. "I suppose you will never do something like that again will you?" It added as it started laughing.

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