All Comments on 'The Real Thing'

by SEVERUSMAX

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
they found love

as strange as this story may be it kind of lifted my heart in the direction you took it with letting kay find love with danny it was sad to hear how other guys would run from her and it made your heart go out to her when she would explain how desperately she wanted someone to be with and im glad they found each other

oh and btw i hate dannys ex cunt bitch-may she burn in hell

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42over 10 years ago
Okay.......very enlightening

Hey....thank you. Great story concept well conceived, written, and delivered.

Thanks again.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you to both commenters. Between you and my own reconsiderations....

...as well as the advice of my wife, I have agreed to resume submission of stories to this site, effective immediately. I am pleased to see that my story affected you in such a positive way. Thank you again for reading and commenting on it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome!

It felt a little hurried but was waaaayyyyy hot! I wish I could meet a woman like Kay! I would do anything and everything with her. Been searching for a long time now for someone like her but to no avail. Thanks for the story!

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