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Who is the Writer, SusanJillParker?

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by Anonymous

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by LeFrog0810/31/13

interesting bio- thanks for sharing

I will keep your comments on ratings and feedback in mind-
I'm surprised at the low voting stats...
It's also nice to know a bit more on SJP, the
Author and person behind the name.
I wish you good fortune in the future,
professionnally and personally.

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by Bilbo5511/09/13

You are one damn fine writer. believe me when i say you left me in tears. your bio is sooooooo touching. BUT YOU ARE A SURVIVOR! i doff ma hat for you. and i'll also take the issue of vote, comment and favourite seriously. mark my word. REMAIN POSITIVE, Love.

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by AmicusVerus11/13/13

Compelling Bio

I hope you're doing well and that life and cash flow is improving. In addition to an interesting life story, you make some good points in your advice about voting and commenting. I recall reading some of your work as BostonFictionWriter (and I almost always vote and sometimes comment), but I don't visit the site regularly (as you can tell from only now getting around to commenting here). I hope you see your name on a paper book in an airport or bookstore one of these days. Good luck.

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by jaybird810012/16/13

Surprised to find this entry :) ***** stars all the way...

Can't believe I haven't already read this and commented. I think Susan is one of the best writers on Literotica-by taking a scenario or story line and then developing the readers thirst for a great entertainment. We read to learn, entertain and enjoy. I am one who prefers the quality of the writer and their characters, it doesn't need to be one spurt after another and everyone always naked to be quality. Susan has a special talent for creating and writing that's especially shown in the series entries. These always read like a small novel. While I'm relatively new to both Literotica and Ms. Parker, I have taken the time to read some of the stories crafted by her 'ghost writer' names and find them equally talented and for my money very enjoyable. I'm also guilty of sometimes reading a story based on a particular subject or theme and failing to either rate or comment, sometimes both. Susan's statements here are applicable to all that we read and I commend her for pointing this out. What a classy lady! I feel for the fact she's had some hardship in life, but still appears to be holding her head up high and forging her way in a increasingly difficult economy to not only live in, but survive also. Keep the creative juices flowing - you have created one hell of a fan who feels like they can consider you a friend :)

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by coinman12/20/13

just another un-bash

First, I would like to thank you and the thousands of others who write for this site. You are correct that it is only fair that we who enjoy the story, give some back to the writer by voting or commenting. I can't speak for others, but I know that I don't leave responses because I feel strange commenting on stories of a sexual nature. I never had a sexual leaning towards incest, but I find some of the warmest stories to come from that section. I have never tried anything close to BDSM, but found that I liked being a fly on the wall in some of the stories. Most of us readers are just too shy to write a response. In this case I felt called out by you. Maybe breaking the ice now will make it easier to comment in the future. Again thank you for your work, btw, you are one of my favorite authors.

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by tucsonbri12/31/13

Life has a way.

I found your story of your life one of emotional strength and courage. I felt that the inner conviction you have to succeed from the late 1990's to today is so inspirational for others. Susan your writing keep me looking for other insights into you life. Keep your strong convictions and bonds with your family and friends and loyal readership.
I am a few years your senior but after reading this story of your life, I am the student learning to understand the will of Life. Thank you for sharing.

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by max05205/23/14

Thank You

I found this to be both insightful and helpful in the creation of my own writing career. When I start posting I plan to do something similar, imitation being the sincerest form of flattery. Sorry, can't find any stars to vote with but would be five stars for certain. Best wishes to you.

max052

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by Lenapt08/11/14

Thank you so much for some loving wet wet Big "O" moments of true pleasure!

My Dear and sweet Susan,

Please, keep on writing those loving Erotic Stories and doing what you most enjoy to do!
I love very much yours lovely stories and I use to score them, mostly with a 4 or 5 stars always!
In this case, we have No stars to score ...But I took it as my favorite Story!
You are also in my Favorites Writers!

As a Mature Lesbian Aunt in a long term family love relationship with my own lovely 75yo Aunt since my teens, I realy love erotic stories about adult and mature lesbian family love, specially Grannies with Moms, Aunts, Sisters, Moms-in-laws, daughters and nieces!
I know yours lovely stories are more F/m stories but it would be lovely to see more Women in the family love relationship of the stories, like FFF/m or FFFF/m/g stories.

Thank you soooooooooo much for some loving Wet Wet Big "O" moments of true pleasure and for bringing pleasure to so many people.

I wish you All the Best!

Aunt Helena
53yo lesbian Aunt from Portugal

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Thank You

You write an excellent biography and some great points about the need for feedback. My wife and I have both started writing some porn/erotica and intend to begin posting some of it here, and your comments are a great help to us. I am not one who worries about my wife or girlfriend finding out I am reading on this site, as we frequently read the stories together. I also have a bachelor's degree in creative writing, and my wife has written for academic law journals, but this genre will be a new twist for us. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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by Ropecleat09/26/14

Interesting Bio

Your travails are unfortunate; mine have been from within. I agree with you on the story bashers who delight in telling you how poorly you write. They are like Quality Control in aerospace. They don't have a clue as to how to design anything or get it built, but they are experts in telling you its done wrong. Thanks for your insights into writing and living.

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by jott5010/28/14

i read this because,quite frankly, i was curious about you. you answered many of my questions, not all though as i believe that you are much more complicated than you realize. actually, im in awe of you because you give us readers so many snapshots of your life while keeping so much of yourself private.
i will many times comment as to my reaction to a story without giving any constructive criticism either good or bad. my lack of criticism however shouldnt be taken without merit...if i tell you how your story makes me feel, then you did a good job, because you MADE ME FEEL. imho no writer can expect more. i believe that as a nonwriter, i am not qualified to criticize your work. im not a language nazi so an occasional mistake is ok with me. you are human after all.
although i have many favorite writers in my profile. you my dear are my favorite favorite.

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by droid0110/28/14

Thanks

Thanks for being open about who you are and sharing. I sometime vote and write a comment but now that I realize the importance I will write more often. Thanks.

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by TousuiTora10/31/14

An intriguing essay

I greatly respect and admire anyone who can write such a heartfelt and candid essay. I shall do my best to fulfill your request to comment on the stories I read.

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by nameless11111/07/14

Thank you Susan

You toke me by my hand and walk beside me while showing me your world. You were there, I was the listener. There are moment of being one, being there.

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by terryeo01/01/15

Training

I would much enjoy a story of how to train a young man toward love making skills. Including foreplay and how much and including an enduring erection sometimes, when wanted. Gentle or vigorous fucking and its uses, what clues to look for in a woman for what she wants, and so on. Should male strive to remain hard while female orgasms many times, is this only a small part of a larger picture?

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by bogusguy03/18/15

sooo you say vote? lol

Very interesting essay! Would give it 5 stars if I could vote. I do vote but never commented till I joined up, now I comment if story is good. I rarely comment on typos or grammatical errors unless there is so many it gets to be so annoying it takes away from the story. Since this was written in 2012, I hope you situation has Improved. All my best to you

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by Bfreetorun06/11/15

I read this before, don't remember if I commented.

I was thinking that you wrote under a couple of other names and those were good stories, too. If I run across them I will comment on this site. I really enjoy your work and like sex stories with a lot of detail, especially mother/son and brother/sister. I don't care much for father/daughter stories (possibly due to the respect and love I have for my daughter). No, I never had incest (cousins don't count) but i do like to read incest stories. Revenge stories are also some of my favorites and death revenge is good, if merited. Thank you for all your efforts, SusanJillParker.

Lamar aka Bfreetorun (age very old, LOL) I was just getting into reading fiction every chance I had when Mickey Spillane started writing.

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by angusmontrose10/04/15

a delight,,,,

what ever name you use,,, your work is a joy to read,,, how you do it ,, time and time again ,,, i can not understand,,,

thankyou,,,,

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by CDchrystal10/24/15

Very Nice

It was a pleasure to read your story in many ways. My comments are likely to echo many others here, but since you have asked for comment, here goes:
I enjoyed reading about your background. A person's history is what makes them who they are and I like to know who people are.
It is great to see someone like yourself who has such a command of the English language. As you have eluded to, it seems lost on so many here. Grammar, spelling and general formatting are qualities that speak to me. Properly done as yours are, such writings earn a high amount of respect from me. I wish I were able to write even close to as well as you do.
Thank you and keep up the good work.

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by Reno360010/26/15

Thank you Susan Jill Parker

I have voted in the past but not commented on any stories....after reading this I feel guilty now. Before reaching the end of your letter I had already decided to comment now and on a regular basis from now on. If it makes a difference that you have reached through to at least one person through your writing, then you should feel successful as you have reached this one. Your writing passion is admirable and from the heart and shows in the several of your stories that I have read. Please continue to write and allow us the non-talented in the writing field the opportunity to enjoy your skills at your chosen passion this is much to our great fortune that you do this with the love that you do. Thank you sincerely, and God bless.

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by cybclimb12/09/15

Hi Susan Jill

I was surprised to know that you were in Harrisburg during the floods in 2011 and you were affected by it. Sorry to hear that you became homeless with your mom. You must have stayed at the Bethesda Mission. I was living in downtown Harrisburg that time too and if I have known you, I would have offered you free shelter temporarily. Anyway, I would like to commend you for your good writing. I only read 1 or 2 of your stories but now that I'm your fan, will be reading more and voting too. If you want to communicate with me, please email me at cybclimb@yahoo.com. Maybe I can visit you sometime when I get back to Harrisburg.

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by atticus402/27/16

I'm a reader

I have always been a reader. In Jr High and High School I read so much that I read myself out of books at the library. I have taken several writing classes about character development, showing not telling, etc. and have written quite a bit in the past few years. I tell you that so that you will understand why I am commenting on this story and your writing in general. I know what it's like and how much an author puts into a story. (or should put into a story) My life has revolved around artistic endeavors. Painting, photography, music, cinematography. Writing, by far, is the most difficult and requires the most thought and experience. Of all the authors here who's work I have read, yours has the most character and emotional impact. The hardships you have gone through show in your writing. Well done.

Now for a suggestion. Take it or leave it as you please. This is not a right / wrong comment, simply my opinion. I understand that you want me to feel what the characters are feeling, I get that. But for me, sometimes less is more. I would prefer less (not none) narrative about what the characters are thinking. Sort of like in "A River Runs Through it", "very good, now rewrite it ... half as long".

One last thought, and you do this better than most of the authors here. Two descriptions of the same incident. Which do you like best?

1. After listening to Atticus, the Sheriff thought about what he had been told before speaking.

2. The Sheriff turned and strode slowly away from Atticus looking intently at the porch floor. He stopped to examine the flowers growing next to the porch for some time before returning to speak with Atticus.

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by Lyqs2Lyq04/17/16

Thank you Susan

Having lost everything in the last economic meltdown, I can sort of relate. Fortunately, I haven't had to take my family to a homeless shelter. I can however, imagine how horrible that must have been for you and your mom. If I could, I would give you two a big hug.

I don't think I have ever read a story and not voted. I think I have always voted a five. I figured, if I read it, I liked it. That warrants a five. However I don't think I have left a comment. This is probably my first. I will do it from now on. I'm also putting you in my favorites.

Sincerely, Brad

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by wkwimp06/22/16

Your life will make a good movie (or TV series)

Why don't you add script creation to your resume (how do I add an acute accent?) It will sell I'd bet. Your life and your stories, maybe toned down a bit, will make a great long long series of movies or long-running TV series.

Bill Wimpenney

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by KingCuddle09/17/16

Because I have just read (and made comments....:+)) on other stories of yours...

I checked. THIS is your story that I had cited as a favorite.

I can say now...It's because it reveals more character, and has fewer asides.

I vaguely remember we may have exchanged a couple of E-mails?

I'll check. And COMMENT if we did. :+)))

Still LOVE your ambition level.

Howzabout trying a story which is entirely developing with ONLY dialog?

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by roned6312/21/16

A writer that makes Literotica real and essential

Susan, you are wonderful. A fabulous writer and valued friend. Since I know you well as well as your personal background, I hurt for you and will always support you. Please keep writing as you do or Literotica will suffer tremendously.
Love always, Ron

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