by YoungBeth
O M G, This Is So Sexciting. I Love Reading
1st Lesbian Expierences. I Have Introduced A
Few Other Females To The Wonderful Satisfaction
Of Lesbian Sex.
A Part 2 Would Be Wonderful !
i came so hard, i'm weak in the knees.....got this little sweetie, i'm talking to who's curious.....will definitely recommend to her....probably to my guy i'm seeing, too.....
really love this very erotic story , MY FIRST BI EXPERIENCE .
reading this i was awesome brilliant writing loved it more please
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Really enjoyed reading this piece. You were able to share your experience in such a way that I was right there, not just watching, but feeling the passion...
Just read part 1 & very impressed. Nice build up. Now for part 2!
This is not just a fabulous effort by a young writer, it ranks with the very best stories I've ever read here or anywhere.
YoungBeth: Your two part story is off the charts excellent! It flows with such thrilling images and emotions. I have been reading stories like this my whole adult life, going clear back to Penthouse Letters, and never have I experienced a better expression of erotic love. I'm in the habit of cutting and pasting my favorites into MS Word, then highlighting favorite passages as I read for the first time. I insert favorite pics I've saved from Adultism as I go along. I believe I bolded more of your phrases than I ever have. Most stories are too long or too short.. yours was the optimal length. And you have left me craving many, many sequels. If you write of a future intimate experience with Sally, Valerie, or Nina, I may drop dead from pleasure. Please consider me your devoted fan, and one willing to edit, co-write, or play with you anytime you feel the urge. Euphorica
You have captured a beautiful sense of innocence and eroticism which is enhanced by your writing style. I love this story and the way in which you tell it. Thank you.
I have loved this story can't wait to see what comes next
Thank you.
I really enjoyed this. The writer did a wonderful job of classily and smoothly weaving in her earlier thoughts and blossoming experiences prior to her "first time." My girlfriend is bi and I'll be sharing this with her and another bi female friend. I too love these first-time f/f stories, especially when they are classy, and kind of romantic in development. Yes, some of us men have such sensibities. Bravo, author/YoungBeth, and Thank You. I hope you return someday to Literotica and contribute more. :)