All Comments on 'Clara's Return'

Since you have the "Clara" stories intertwined with "Hillary", it would be nice to find out in what order we should read them. :) Great stories but without a roadmap it's a bit jumbled!

Agreed! If I was better organized I'd have done that. Or if I had know I couldn't go back and fix it...

I'll try to find time to get an index together so future readers will not be inconvenienced.

Bit hard to believe a guy would want to reduce the size of his dick down to seven inches, ten yes but to go smaller beggars belief.

Was expecting a little more.

Awww, I wanted them to end up together ! :(

And without having his dick reduced, but this one is secondary.

I really like your story y'know.

Sorry, this was stupid and unbelievable. The Witch thing is no problem. But going from 15 to 7?? No male in his right mind would ever do that. And he says Hillary left, so what's he worried about what she'd think?? Confusing.

I think he should ask Clarissa out! I think they are the perfect couple!! Keep writing!!

Really enjoyed her story arc

Just under seven inches sounds about right as I can see where fifteen would scare most women and he would only be able to use about half of it anyway. Another well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the Hillary follow on stories. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.