A good story can always be made gr8 in it's continuation. The one star comment obviously seems to think he/she can write something better so I believe they should try to do so. The story is interesting and I now wonder where it will take us, the readers next.
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Certified Fool
One star trash.
I like this
More please...
Pretty good
Not as good as your other series, but still good.
A good start keep it up
A good story can always be made gr8 in it's continuation. The one star comment obviously seems to think he/she can write something better so I believe they should try to do so. The story is interesting and I now wonder where it will take us, the readers next.
Waiting
Any day now you'll finish this....
Don't let him be a but hole let him actually care for her
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