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by Sidney4304/26/12

Lots of little errors in spelling that make for less easy reading. I suppose its an OK story, but really about two people who are cheating on their "true loves" who are away on business. They are happy with the relationship, however brief, but I wonder what the respective true loves would think about it?

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by virago92004/27/12

spelling sucked, aborted read during first paragraph.

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by Anonymous04/27/12

Shitty writing

Did you even attempt to proof this mess? This was quite possibly the worst writing I have ever read.

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