An Accidental Love God Ch. 11

Maybe it's just me...

I think the ending was pretty sudden, and could have could have gone more smoothly. Good story, though.

Great series thank you.

Good Series

I like your style. You can start another any time. I'm 'up' for it.

WHAT ABOUT HIS WIFE AND KIDS?

I loved the series and concept but feel that that you short changed his wife and totally ignored his kids. Maybe you could do a spin-off where his wife becomes a succubus and his kids discover their heritage.

Just a suggestion, but I feel kind of sorry for him. After all, it is like knowing your wife has an incurable disease with only a very limited time to live. Take pity on the poor guy and bring her into the fold too.

5*****
M51

Minor nitpick

The proper plurals are "incubi" and "Succubi".

Great story.

really nice story

Thanks for a good story. just enough description to keep the story line from becoming boring. Again thanks great read.