Glad you enjoyed my first published story, I am hoping to have more.
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Anonymous05/01/12
Very, very nice.
Very classy story and a nice change from the usual perving. You took a realistic situation we've all been in and enhanced it into something very hot but not completely ridiculous. I especially liked that she was a nicely mature 30, not the standard 18. Great job.
I am glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, I do try to be more realistic in my writing. Fantasies are fun, but the more realistic the fantasy, the better the story. Again thank you for commenting.
simpletimes
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Anonymous05/05/12
Can't wait for festival season now ;) very nice indeed
This story is so good. everything about it is perfect. This is also a really big fantasy of mine. i love that she was thirty too. It was so sensual. i really hope you find her someday
@playwithme1981 I do plan on writing more, just took a bit of a break to spend time with my new love.
I am glad you enjoyed my attempt at writing, it makes me feel good know others appreciate my mind.
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god....i'm so horny right now.x
Glad you enjoyed my first published story, I am hoping to have more.
Very, very nice.
Very classy story and a nice change from the usual perving. You took a realistic situation we've all been in and enhanced it into something very hot but not completely ridiculous. I especially liked that she was a nicely mature 30, not the standard 18. Great job.
Thank you
I am glad you enjoyed the story. Yes, I do try to be more realistic in my writing. Fantasies are fun, but the more realistic the fantasy, the better the story. Again thank you for commenting.
simpletimes
Can't wait for festival season now ;) very nice indeed
You should ...
Definitely continue this. I totally enjoyed it.
This story is so good. everything about it is perfect. This is also a really big fantasy of mine. i love that she was thirty too. It was so sensual.
This story is so good. everything about it is perfect. This is also a really big fantasy of mine. i love that she was thirty too. It was so sensual. i really hope you find her someday
*Bites lip*
So good...I want mooore!
@playwithme1981 I do plan on writing more, just took a bit of a break to spend time with my new love.
I am glad you enjoyed my attempt at writing, it makes me feel good know others appreciate my mind.
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