All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 21'

Too short as always. I love this story but hate when it stops but can't wait to find out what is so urgent about the ascension and why Luma is not happy about it...

OK stopping there just about gave me a heart attack. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I look forward to every chapter as it posts, and this one did not disappoint. Astaria told Star he would beg for ascension soon and that as a dragon he has healing properties, and the first thing I though of was Bridge, that somehow Luma will not be able to cure him fast enough and Star will act to save him.

Thanks for another great chapter.

If you don't want to wait for the next chapter of Fallen by Nephylim she has posted the completed version of her story on another site.

http://www.gayauthors.org/story/nephylim/Fallench

It's a great story and no waiting is awesome.

To continue where you left off you want to skip to Chapter 21 at http://www.gayauthors.org/story/nephylim/Fallench

No matter how many times I read this story I am entranced.