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by Anonymous05/23/12

great job

Great start can't wait for more

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by Anonymous05/23/12

nice start

Interested to see your direction for this story

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by Anonymous05/23/12

Limitless

This is basically the same plot as limitless you even copied the bit how they bumped into each other

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