Catching up with Denise

very nice

loved it. will give only one critique,and it not a bad one. I can't tell if i'm hearing an Australian accent in the way you have the dialog, or if your coming across as a little too I guess 'staged' with the dialog. I'm not seeing it in your descriptions just when you have them talking to one another. Story line and pacing were spot on. Beautifully done

Great job

I loved this story. I guess I'm a sucker for more romantic pieces. This one was very emotional and also very realistic. You never know when or where you'll find love and after a divorce, two people who are both hurting can often find peace with someone they'd never have otherwise considered. Kudos

More than sex

Great love story, it's so much more than the wham-bam screw everyone story most of these are. Very warm, gentle and believable. Thanks

Loved it!

You took your time and told us a story, slowly enough that Life is what it is all about. The erotic portions were just that; erotic, as opposed to those authors who feel they must dredge up the most profane adjectives to sell the story to their readers. A true love story.

Two more: There were very few errors which made the reading flow smoothly from the screen to my mind, and, in this world made smaller by the World Wide Web, please do not ever lose that style of writing that defines you as being from Down Under. While it is still in English, the manner in which it is presented adds much more color (colour for you!).

Thank you and please continue to share with us.

Beautiful. Loved it. Thank you.

Simply Beautiful

That was a beautiful tale of love between two people whose relationship morphed through more than two decades. Having been a young man infatuated with a woman 14 years my senior and now as an old man who enjoys the furtive attentions of a gorgeous woman fully 30 years my junior, I can appreciate the culmination in this story, whether fact or delicious fiction. Thank you for sharing with the rest of us!

sensual

Story has a soft touch- nicely written.