All Comments on 'In The Family Way'

Why did it have to be a PREGNANT woman?

I'm sure would like to know why she was comtemplating suicide and why did the witch switch him?

I really want to know the details.

Great short intro story, it has enough promise to be a really good story full of characterization, I hope you continue.

This certainly has potential! I love horny pregnant chicks ;D

This is a great start to the story, please do continue to write more

Please continue I loved it

I have enjoyed the way you have started the series. You have a lot of potential of you continue this.

I do want to comment on your flow. I recommend that while you are writing try to make the story flow from one point to another. I am not a writer but maybe something like this "As I lay back with my eyes closed I could hear the witch chant in a strange language. As she was chanting I could feel the hair on the back of my head stand up. All of a sudden there was a bright flash of light....then blackness

The next thing I know I feel a sensation like I have never felt before. When I open my eyes I see that I am on my hands and knees on a bed and I can feel someone behind me....fucking Me!"

Please write more. This has been a dream of mine for ever!

I enjoyed this start. I have a few questions I hope your story will answer. Why was the woman thinking of suicide? Can you describe her life a bit? What happens with her in the male body?

I also wish he hadn't been fucked without his consent. Who was that guy, anyway?

Thanks for writing.I do have a user name (Grab my balls 2) but don't recall my password.

Great story. Keep it going!