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Hormonal Surges Ch. 04

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by Anonymous05/05/12

longer plzz,love it

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by NicoleAmy05/05/12

i agree, longer please! It seems like the reader just gets into the 'chapter' and then its ended. Im definately intrigued now... And left wanting more.

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by Anonymous05/06/12

WHAT?!

It's short.....But I like how the chapters come out fast. I do hope for longer chapters, though, and I hope you aren't another author who leaves her/his story unfinished on Literotica. KEEP WRITING!!!!!

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