Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Naked Barmaid'

by Lady Grey

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 5 Comments
SLOgentSLOgentalmost 12 years ago
Interesting

Fun idea, but the story screams for an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Great story, really enjoyed it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Well Done

I've read this story a number of times since I first ran across it. It remains enjoyable with each reading. Thank you for it.

loveloverloveloveralmost 7 years ago
Your second story for me tonight

Well I was happy it worked out well for both of you. I much preferred Slut Wife, tho this wasn't bad. Let's see about Nude in Public....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story, though needs a few tiny fixes.

Loved it!

The description of Jill cuts off in mid-sentence though. Also wrote "complement" (matches with) instead of "compliment" (tells someone something nice)

Still, thank you!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login