All Comments on 'Coming Into The Mob... Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

a little proof reading on the paragraph where he leaves and she is worried

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hm

Wasnt convinced by this in the first 2 chapters but this one was actually quite good, looking forward to the next part :)

Darksider1029Darksider1029almost 12 years ago
LOVE IT!

I love this can't wait to read the rest!

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