good story, but i felt you used the adjective 'incestuous' a little too often.
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Anonymous04/30/12
Nice short story
Many young men indulge in such behavior. Many prim and proper mother's ignore the situation. It is best to address the situation and instill the proper discipline that young men need.
Short or not... I loved it. You really need to ad at least a second part. I say at least, because your story could become great stuff. Don't feel hurt by the other advices here, there's something right in what they said... but please, keep writing that story, you've start it very well. And like one of the guys said here ; It would be great to ad stockings, and the highest heels the mother can wear at home and at work.
Delicious little tale of a mother and son. Very erotic...like every good story, it was exactly the right length too. Great narrative and dialogue! Looking forward to the next!
Very good story. Thank you very much for sharing. I am well past 19 now but that thoughts I had when I was living at home with my mom, heck even after I moved out, hell even now. LOL
So HOT and arousing ! I hope you write another chapter, as Tom and Karen his Mom are really longing for direct sex and are developing a great arrangement. His mom can teach him many things and Tom can too. Thanks !!
While I enjoyed the story,I believe that I was enjoying it "too well" as I finished it sooner than expected.With that being said,congrads' on a well writen piece.
i liked it reminds me so much of me and my nephew almost an exact story
and we still are having the hottest times
he is my husbands borthers son and so hony and turns me on just like her son does, ihve played some with son but we hav decided not to go all the way i just jack him
Please do more sequels, this is the kind of story I have been waiting to read foir so long. Not to unbelievable, at the same time very hot. I love how the mom doesnt give into it to quickly. If you could work in some threesome involving the son and mom I would be forever indebted
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Anonymous05/27/12
Sequel plz
I beg u to write Sequel plz i want him him to fuck her Ass
Loved reading this. I have a similar experience, but I cannot say it was incest. It was with my sister-in-law's son. I did feel guilty at first since I am much older and part of the family. Can you email me. I can tell you my story and with your writing skills, I am sure it would make good reading
angela_lee_mbf@yahoo.com.
Thank once again - Angela
i loved it, so very close to me and my son in every way exceept i am married
but so close to our realtionship that has grown owver 2 years , what about other mom's out there is ur story close
go'on. I really like this read.. I'm hoping you will extend this story. I'm the neighbors sun that had it off after she got divorced...what I have refereed to as my sex'ucation. she was the first smooth pussy..and I have never gone back. first anal...now addicted to fuck ass...she was surprised that I has such an oral fetish...and completely surprised I'd lick her ass with the same enthusiasm....not to mention pushing in deep. We were each others fist pee play....oh I could go on and on
i never comment i have read hundreds of story's on this site this is one of the best
if not the best please write more
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Anonymous01/22/13
good and bad feedback
wheres the build up? theres no way she would just go straight to the point within a day. the thought process was sloppy. you need to add some sort of suspence. now that i said all of that it was however very well gramatically correct and very precise. the eroticism of it did have a good impact
This story, after some introductive character self-examination, and overview, really gets to the nub of the plot hurriedly.
Mom (Karen) thinks she has control of the necessary incestual stimulation of her sexual urges and needs; however, she lost control long ago with her son, just after she agreed to bargain with him. She never looked back after that encounter, she wanted more, and she gave more, and she got it all with nary a pause!
Of course, as with most readers, I concur and urge the writer to extend this most joyous, incestual (I DON'T CARE HOW OFTEN YOU USE THE WORD) mother and son joyfuckfest. My personal opinion is Mother Karen should be impregnated, they began dating, fulfilling their lives as any male and female lovers do, movies, camping, dinners, a cruise, hiking, cabin in the wilderness (all with Mother Karen showing a little skin, no panties, braless, even her son letting her play and arouse him in the same manner, but ALWAYS with just the two of them). The perfect incest relationship is keeping it pure with just the love-bird characters acting just as if they are any other couple in love, engaged and married.
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Anonymous05/08/13
Great!!
A nice fantasy......I came twice....keep it up :-)
😍I really enjoyed this, mmmmm had many orgasm Thank You Pleas keep writing
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Anonymous06/16/13
Awesome story. I have fantasized about that premise(mom finding out son masturbates to pics of her) and you did the story great justice. Am rock hardnow. Thanks,
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Anonymous06/19/13
Great story. Lost count how many times I came..
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Anonymous07/03/13
amazing story
Why can't this happen in real life! Its so perfect in every way.
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Anonymous07/06/13
absolutely amazing
This story is super hot. Are there sequels?
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Anonymous08/24/13
Hot!!
Imagine the mom as jacqueline fernandes.. Its way hotter then
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Anonymous09/08/13
Been there before.
A great story, well told and it could be true.
I had a similar experience as an 18 year old. I was working the night shift in a hospital and came home in the morning one day, walked in to my bathroom and found my mom using my shower. She made the excuse that she didn't want to clean her and my shower that morning.My mom was left a young widow when I was 10 years old, and I don't think she had had a man since. When she had finished showering with me watching, she asked me to have a shower and she could watch. Then she asked could she come in and wash my back and give me a massage to ease the effort of the nights work.She washed my back and massaged my shoulders and then turned me around and washed my erect cock and brought me off.
After drying each other she said that we should wait till l had slept before we talked about it.
Will write the full. true story one day. K
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Anonymous10/14/13
wish I was a woman
So I could feel some one cumming inside my wet pussy ane I bet men would rather get blow jobs from a woman thang a guy and I deff. like giving those
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Anonymous10/19/13
SEQUEL!
I need more! PLEASE make a sequel!
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Anonymous12/15/13
Good story!
Good story; pretty hot & easy mom! We need more like this.
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Anonymous01/14/14
Mother
was divorced and we lived alone. I was 20 at the time of story. She was very good looking. When I would get home late she would be already in bed asleep. I was very active with other women but I had many times masturbated because of her. A few times I walked in her room and lifted the covers and watched her naked pussy and tits, I would caress her pussy hair lightly and sometimes kiss a brest, she never seemed to notice, I would then go to the bathroom or my room and jerk off. I know she knew what was happening but we never spoke or did anything else!
English
awesome
That was jst awesome ...i felt so hard reading that lovely mom-son story...
wonderful
Just great! Just the right amount of tension and wondering will she/won't she and final fulfillment at the end. Well done.
I would love a second part to this story.
One where they fuck in her bed and she's totally . Maybe have then do everything together especially oral sex.
Fucking hot....
I love this story....
More..
Can we expect more from this story?
Got me very very hard ;)
Lingerie/heels?
Any chance we can get these worked into part 2?
good story
good story, but i felt you used the adjective 'incestuous' a little too often.
Nice short story
Many young men indulge in such behavior. Many prim and proper mother's ignore the situation. It is best to address the situation and instill the proper discipline that young men need.
We need you to do more
Short or not... I loved it. You really need to ad at least a second part. I say at least, because your story could become great stuff. Don't feel hurt by the other advices here, there's something right in what they said... but please, keep writing that story, you've start it very well. And like one of the guys said here ; It would be great to ad stockings, and the highest heels the mother can wear at home and at work.
Bravo!
Delicious little tale of a mother and son. Very erotic...like every good story, it was exactly the right length too. Great narrative and dialogue! Looking forward to the next!
VERY GOOD
Very good story. Thank you very much for sharing. I am well past 19 now but that thoughts I had when I was living at home with my mom, heck even after I moved out, hell even now. LOL
So HOT and arousing ! I hope you write another chapter, as Tom and Karen his Mom are really longing for direct sex and are developing a great arrangement. His mom can teach him many things and Tom can too. Thanks !!
yum
Makes me wish I had a son.
a little fast...
While I enjoyed the story,I believe that I was enjoying it "too well" as I finished it sooner than expected.With that being said,congrads' on a well writen piece.
vary good
that was hot i was 16 the first time i fucked my my ill never forget the first time
Loved this story!
A great premise about switching the pictures... plausible, at a certain level.
I'm hoping that the concluding lines lead to a Chapter 2 in which the lad enjoys his mother's ass.
Yummy
Mmmmm I loved it too. I wish I had a son too !!!! Lol. I do have 2 nephews. Hmmmmm, I wonder ......
Allison
more episodes needed
Good story so far, but it cries out for more exciting chapters. I hope you will supply them as rapidly as you can!
nice
i liked it reminds me so much of me and my nephew almost an exact story
and we still are having the hottest times
he is my husbands borthers son and so hony and turns me on just like her son does, ihve played some with son but we hav decided not to go all the way i just jack him
Sequels
Please do more sequels, this is the kind of story I have been waiting to read foir so long. Not to unbelievable, at the same time very hot. I love how the mom doesnt give into it to quickly. If you could work in some threesome involving the son and mom I would be forever indebted
Sequel plz
I beg u to write Sequel plz i want him him to fuck her Ass
Awesome Story
The fact that he was using a pic of Mom and using it to masturbate to ... and Mom found out about it is very hot.
good as hell
what a lovly story! Wow, really its a good one. Well written and keep writing. Thanks alot.
this is a very hot story, please continue with tom fucking his mom in the ass
super duper story
I loooove the way she let him see her private parts until she finally fucks him, please continue,mmmm
I wish i was him
Fucking Hot!! where is the 2nd part..?? im feelin damn hot.
Awesome story - well written
Hi Heyall,
Loved reading this. I have a similar experience, but I cannot say it was incest. It was with my sister-in-law's son. I did feel guilty at first since I am much older and part of the family. Can you email me. I can tell you my story and with your writing skills, I am sure it would make good reading
angela_lee_mbf@yahoo.com.
Thank once again - Angela
wow so hot
i loved it, so very close to me and my son in every way exceept i am married
but so close to our realtionship that has grown owver 2 years , what about other mom's out there is ur story close
the show must
go'on. I really like this read.. I'm hoping you will extend this story. I'm the neighbors sun that had it off after she got divorced...what I have refereed to as my sex'ucation. she was the first smooth pussy..and I have never gone back. first anal...now addicted to fuck ass...she was surprised that I has such an oral fetish...and completely surprised I'd lick her ass with the same enthusiasm....not to mention pushing in deep. We were each others fist pee play....oh I could go on and on
Completely amazing...
I never thought I would find anything like this so erotic.
WET
FUCKING LOVED IT
Delightful!
A purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect 10!
the one
i never comment i have read hundreds of story's on this site this is one of the best
if not the best please write more
good and bad feedback
wheres the build up? theres no way she would just go straight to the point within a day. the thought process was sloppy. you need to add some sort of suspence. now that i said all of that it was however very well gramatically correct and very precise. the eroticism of it did have a good impact
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This story, after some introductive character self-examination, and overview, really gets to the nub of the plot hurriedly.
Mom (Karen) thinks she has control of the necessary incestual stimulation of her sexual urges and needs; however, she lost control long ago with her son, just after she agreed to bargain with him. She never looked back after that encounter, she wanted more, and she gave more, and she got it all with nary a pause!
Of course, as with most readers, I concur and urge the writer to extend this most joyous, incestual (I DON'T CARE HOW OFTEN YOU USE THE WORD) mother and son joyfuckfest. My personal opinion is Mother Karen should be impregnated, they began dating, fulfilling their lives as any male and female lovers do, movies, camping, dinners, a cruise, hiking, cabin in the wilderness (all with Mother Karen showing a little skin, no panties, braless, even her son letting her play and arouse him in the same manner, but ALWAYS with just the two of them). The perfect incest relationship is keeping it pure with just the love-bird characters acting just as if they are any other couple in love, engaged and married.
Great!!
A nice fantasy......I came twice....keep it up :-)
God This was so freekin HOT😛😛😛😛😛😛
😍I really enjoyed this, mmmmm had many orgasm Thank You Pleas keep writing
Awesome story. I have fantasized about that premise(mom finding out son masturbates to pics of her) and you did the story great justice. Am rock hardnow. Thanks,
Great story. Lost count how many times I came..
amazing story
Why can't this happen in real life! Its so perfect in every way.
absolutely amazing
This story is super hot. Are there sequels?
Hot!!
Imagine the mom as jacqueline fernandes.. Its way hotter then
Been there before.
A great story, well told and it could be true.
I had a similar experience as an 18 year old. I was working the night shift in a hospital and came home in the morning one day, walked in to my bathroom and found my mom using my shower. She made the excuse that she didn't want to clean her and my shower that morning.My mom was left a young widow when I was 10 years old, and I don't think she had had a man since. When she had finished showering with me watching, she asked me to have a shower and she could watch. Then she asked could she come in and wash my back and give me a massage to ease the effort of the nights work.She washed my back and massaged my shoulders and then turned me around and washed my erect cock and brought me off.
After drying each other she said that we should wait till l had slept before we talked about it.
Will write the full. true story one day. K
wish I was a woman
So I could feel some one cumming inside my wet pussy ane I bet men would rather get blow jobs from a woman thang a guy and I deff. like giving those
SEQUEL!
I need more! PLEASE make a sequel!
Good story!
Good story; pretty hot & easy mom! We need more like this.
Mother
was divorced and we lived alone. I was 20 at the time of story. She was very good looking. When I would get home late she would be already in bed asleep. I was very active with other women but I had many times masturbated because of her. A few times I walked in her room and lifted the covers and watched her naked pussy and tits, I would caress her pussy hair lightly and sometimes kiss a brest, she never seemed to notice, I would then go to the bathroom or my room and jerk off. I know she knew what was happening but we never spoke or did anything else!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
MOre More More
fanfucking tastic
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