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by Anonymous

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by imurddy04/30/12

not erotic

It was horror, just not erotic. Put some sex in it.

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by Anonymous04/30/12

anticlimax

sex and death always work well together in fiction - this story just needed some sex!

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by Absalomride04/30/12

Yah boo hiss from the cheap seats...

you gotta do better to get took serious so a seriously friggin' reluctant 4*. Oh shit i already clicked 2. Oops.

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