All Comments on 'Caretaker'

Please More!! I really want to see what happens next...

Very nice start to what appears to be a great story if the rest is like this. I hope we don't have to wait too long for the continuation.

I'm curious and simply can't wait (just kidding)......I hate cliffhangers but love the beginning, so this is going to be a good one I can feel it.

Why must it end so soon? I want more. :) I don't mind short stories as long as there's another chapter. Will look back for an update.

on your first story, and what a first story it is! You have grabbed my attention and now I just want to know what happens next. As for people complaining about the cliffhanger, I love it. To me cliffhangers are what keeps the story fresh in my mind. If it had a nice little ending what would bring me back? I like the characters you have created. That you were able to give brief descriptions of them and tell a story in so few words goes to your ability to write. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope the wait isn't a long one.

1st chapter. on the tags for this story its interracial is it a wm/bw or bm/wm? just curious! i like this story hope you post soon.

... of non-human stories... being SHORT enough to be concealed to slip past people to be used as a weapon to beat the author with...

other then that, great premise... just impossibly short!

:o Characters are interesting. A delta born to two alphas. Nice.

And then a battered woman. I wonder why she won't leave that Jimmy o.o?

Continue writing~

Absolutely needs more.

This story caught my attention and I can't wait for the update to it. I hope Jimmy gets his throat ripped out...lol but it is islnteresting reading a werewolf story about a wolf who is the stereotypical alpha or typical wolf so on that note it's refreshing. Keep up the good work. Can wait on more development of Sara and Mark's characters

you have to simply post longer chapters, as one reader pointed out, a non-human story normally is much longer chapter wise and if you keep posting short chapters you are risking to lose readers who are not content to go towards a conclusion in baby steps.

The story line is very promising though and I hope you have the chapters ready to come....

Interesting and individual, so far. It's a bit of a teaser, though, isn't it!?

Please continue ASAP!!!!

H ... I think not!

though i do wish it was a bit longer

but it caught my attention :)

How is it Interracial? Whose what race ?

Impressive beginning. The story just sucks you in. I can't wait to see this story develop!

Enjoying this a little too much lol I wanna see jimmy get the shit kicked out of him lol please continue this story its awesome

So far this a great story. A little rough at first, but has a strong finish, and it keeps you guessing. The characters make you want to cheer, especially for the hero, on a quest to find his one true love. I can't wait to see chapter 2.

MzMagicBeauty, he mentions his inner-wolf. He's obviously a werewolf. How awesome is that? Could of been longer though. I've seen stories here with a lot more pages. One pagers often leave one hanging.

Is this it? Nothing else?

u teaser

this sounds good. cant wait to find out more.. is she his soulmate?