The Honey Trap

Great. Story

Well looks like Melina shot her wad . Frank only wanted to humiliate Michael and he go to screw Melanie to boot. Can you spell stupid it's spelled Melanie. The honey trap worked and I think Rieanne may have fallen just a little in love with. Michael. Who knows but for sure Penny is In love with. Michael and he possibly with. Penny. I really enjoyed the story on one last note I hope they kick Frank out of the Country. Club and if they think about it they will because which wife will he try and take next. So let the husband's chew on that and Frank is. History and any other he gets to join. They call it Black. Balled. So looks like he may meet a boyfriend or two at the club he was sent to.
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.Ron

nicely turned

Nice to see the good guy win.

Beautiful

Sweet ending.

Fantastically different !!!

I loved the story. No other words to say it. The description, the narrative, the build up, everything has been so immaculate.

Entertaining Page Turner

The one thing that kept nagging me early on was when it was that the reader was going to be informed of the wife's reasons and motivations for moving on.

It should have been obvious after the wife's blasé reaction to the confrontation with her husband. He plainly reveals that he has seen them in all of the bestial glory of their adultery. But the wife's dali-esque demeanor reaches just enough into the farcical domain that an astute observer of loving wives gone astray would have caught the clue: this drama will walk the thin rouge line between genuine emotional verity and the mad mad mad mad world of matrimonial mayhem.

Ok, I digress into a little entertaining verbiage of my own :))

Frank the neanderthal usurper browbeats Michael all over the tennis courts, etc, etc and then goes full-retard during the scene of the unraveling, saying of Rhiannon, the ringer:

"Listen, Melanie, we had a good thing for a while, but it would never have lasted. Now I've found someone better and I'm going to be devoting all my time to her."

Yes, I finally realized that we weren't going to get an "Ohio" gut-level smackdown in the denoument.

So, I'm a little slow on the uptake. Nonetheless, it was fun!!

Thank you, Mr. Mac.

Well done

A amusing story, with moral and a happy ending, who could ask for Mode.

One of the better ones I really enjoyed it .

another happy ending

I think Rhiannon deserves her own happy ending

Masterpice!

Amazing story!!
C'mon guy, we miss you like crazy!!

one of your better stories

Definitely a WINNER!

Thank you for this one...especially the very end!

Romantic!

Nice story. Not much sex but nice anyway. So much better ending than the "she cheated,he lost everything" endings that leave the soul hurting.

Nice and lovely story! I enjoyed readining

What a great and lovely story with sweet happy end!
The author was very creative, the story is well written with good context.
I really enjoy reading it all the way through.
Congrats to the author!

Revenge

I always like these tales when the wronged one gets their own back it is always a good story it does not matter whether or not the avenger is the male or female.

Paybacks

Great story.Can't wait for the movie to come out.Truly a wonderful saga.

Six stars is still not enough

Smoothly told, regardless of being a bit predictable, the finish was perfect.
Jason

Ain't Payback a Bitch?

Wonderful story!! Thank you for a tale that left me with a smile on my face. It's nice to not only see the Bitch get what's coming to her, but the dirty, rotten, scoundrel SOB as well. I do love it so when a beautiful plan comes together!

Ancient Klingon Proverb: "Revenge is a dish best served cold."

It's Sad

Its sad that Melanie never even tried talking with Michael about her dissatisfaction with the marriage. Had she done so, she would have at least had a clearer understanding of herself and perhaps might even had saved her marriage.

Karma can be a real Bitch

Melanie was stupid, she had a good man that loved her and trusted her and she let an obnoxious piece of crap lour her away. He wanted to screw her but screw over Michael more. I think Rhiannon fell just a bit in love with Michael and Penny already loved him. Wonder what happens in there future? Maybe a follow up story is in order.
R.M./ cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Awesome!!

I wish there had been a male equivalent to this back in the 90's! I could have used one! Great story! Keep writing!!

Awe and then some

She-it man! This is a very good story! Frank might find his soul mate at the gay bar what a gas man! I love B.T.B & romance and they are in there! THANKS FOR A GREAT READ MAN, Dude, Bro, Mate, Buddy, Pal.or what ever!? Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE. Oh I Forgot Guy how could I forget Guy! BYE!

Fantastic! Good thing it was fiction!

This was a perfect situation and ending for Frank and Melanie. And Penny got the good guy in the end. Keep them coming!

What a terrific story !!!

You sir can really write. You have an incredible talent and I'm so happy that you've decided to share it with the rest of us. Thank you so much. You could easily write books that I would pay for. A - 6, if I could give it. One of the best !!!

Great writing, of course.

I gave it a 5 for the writing and for the lack of reconciliation. I thought hubby was a little wimpy and I guess the wife did too. For those commenters who lamented the wife not discussing with her husband what was needed to fix their relationship I say, she wasn't dissatisfied with the marriage per se, she was just an opportunist and within the dictates of her narcissism she felt empowered to go for the "better" opportunity. Michael was probably nothing but a starter husband from the beginning. A foot in the door to that lifestyle. And because he was sensitive and "just a tennis player" he wasn't worth worrying about. I liked Penny, good woman and a well written character. Have known a few like her down through the years but I have my own so wasn't tempted beyond an appreciation of character. As for Frank, unfortunately those that I have known have been legion. (don't know why I'm writing like an Old Testament Prophet but oh well) Always enjoy this author and look forward to reading his stuff, even if it's all re-runs for me. So, if you are indeed monitoring your comments section, thank you for sharing your stories and your talents.

I noticed in the LW category today and for the last week or so, not one story earned more than a 4 and most were between 2 and 3. Not a good statement about the stories being presented. Most are cuckies and submissive husbands to whatever the writer's worst fears are.

Love it when the underdog wins!

A thoroughly plausible tale of revenge and better yet, Michael did indeed 'trade up'.
Lovely twists at the end, with Penny 'flooring' Melanie, then having won her man, graciously allows Melanie to stay in her empty house for the night. Rhiannon proved herself to be a "tart with a heart" and it was a good gesture to return her 'presents' to Michael? I really enjoyed this story and awarded it 5 stars.

Great! Fantastic! My Kind Of Story!

This had everything I like in a story. Revenge and the good guy wins a much better woman. Easy 5-Star rating.

Right until the end...

It was an awesome story. Thoroughly enjoyable. But whores NEVER give back money.

i married the wrong sister

this sounds like something that happen to me. we married had a son & before he was a yr old she wanted out. about 3 yrs later her older sister started dating & later married and were together for over 27 yrs before she passed away, the sister married a man 22 yrs older over money and now she's a maid more than a wife. I ended up with the best 1 .

beautiful story

Thank you

PLANS AND PLANNING

and when and if it all comes together, its an ace every serve. TK U MLJ LV NV

@ Anony 12/23/16

So how much money did they get you for? Should know better.

There was something there

She was a paid escort not a Whore as one person called Rhiannon lots of difference. I think she fell a little in love with Michelle we know that Penny loved him. Melanie his wife let an idiot like Frank in her panties and ruined a good marriage she acted like a silly school girl swept off her feet by a jerk with a line of bullshit. The whole deal was to get over on Michael screwing her was just a side benefit. Very good story 5 stars plus.
Mack

Wow! Such justice.

Splendidly crafted story. Very well written and with "principles" to boot.

Whow !!!

Looking for the usual smutty story and ended up reading an extremely well written masterpiece. Tremendously skilful storyline - more of these stories please

Fantastic job !!!!!!!

Very well written. Loved the storyline. Thank you for your time and effort.
Looking forward to reading more of your stories

Second time around..

Still a 5

Excellent.

Storyline hooked me well. I worried a bit that R might fall for Frank and Michael get kicked again, but that was part of the attraction. Nice job.

Really liked the story, but....

I'm a little tired of these characters being so "shocked" when the discover their wives cheating, then the just slither away! FUCK THAT SHIT!!!!
Shock would have been my first reaction, QUICKLY replaced by anger and rage! Frank might have been much bigger but I would have quickly gone to the garage, gotten a pipe wrench...a lead pipe...a 2x4...or WHATEVER, and come back in and beat the bloody piss out of the mother fucker, making sure he could never use his cock and balls EVER again!
The other thing, when Melanie approached and took an attitude, I'd have spit in her face!
It's amazing that these guys you write, can come up with these "clever" plans at revenge but have no clue about their wives, or in Michael's case, Penny! Give me a break!!!

OK so what is next??

Great story but how about a follow up story? What happens with Michael,Penny,Melanie and Rhiannon and we cannot forget Frank and all the wives that were truly not happy with what was going on they could put pressure on there husband's to kick Frank and Melanie out of the club. 5 stars in my favorites.
Ron