All Comments on 'Adam Was the All Powerful CEO'

do u get off sucking ur wife's lover's cock!!

Boss is man whore, wife is skank, n hubby, why doesnt he suicide, so at least some weight will reduce.

do u get off sucking ur wife's lover's cock!!

Boss is man whore, wife is skank, n hubby, why doesnt he suicide, so at least some weight will reduce.

This was a really though out story but the ending was rushed.

about selling ones soul for riches and powers. TK U MLJ LV NV

Your kidding right? Slut wife who cucked her husband and he thinks its is fault ?Really dumlb

Less than 16 hours (going by your timeline) after talking to her loving husband about THEIR future inc children etc she starts to profess her love for a RAPIST who drugged her to have his evil way and even after the drugs would have worn off she continues without a care for her supposed love of her life she MARRIED. Maybe the poor hubby should have really shown his worth by blowing this pricks balls off and supergluing a dildo up the cheating skanks cunt. That would be a much prefered ending to the pussy whipped laying down you rushed into.

This story was total crap!

This is a story about a "loving wife" ? Where is she?

I don't usually read stories with a rating less than 4, and almost never read ones rated 3 or less. Now I remember why.

Had everything except the donkey in this cheating trophy wife in only three pages. A nice accomplishment but one I would have preferred to read about in detail over three chapters at least. There are other trophy wives and goal minded husbands In Lit land and you are a talented author so just maybe ...

the cliche, where Taylor may be in a guilded cage, and Adam, there for others to bed. Tom got the best part of the deal, away from Taylor, and a chance for everything she would be unable to give him.

Frankly, I never read this kind of story and went into speed reading mode when I saw where it was going. Tom probably did get the best part of the deal, as he got a good job and lots of salary and rid of a cheating bitch in the bargain. Still, there are people like Adam out there and with any luck his plane will crash someday ridding the world of one more amoral asshole.

Loved it. 5*

Fiction or not, the majority of women out there are t this payhetically weak willed or stupid. Adam would never marry her, he is a serial seduceer, not a family man... Follow your own. Haracterizations. Their first time together was t making love, that was fucking, i ghink most readers could agree on the usage of the word love, sex, fucking, rutting... Get on board with a thesaurus wheatie.

can end up exactly the same way and have the power to fuck all his employees wives..and with what happened to his id say if i was tom id fuck them all...if i wanted kids id make some woman pregnant just enough to give me a kid or two..other wise id fuck who i wanted when i wanted and virgins would move to the top of the list ..well at least for one day as for my ex wife n boss to make billions of dollars and fuck a thousand other women sounds like a good tradeoff im not sure adam was so damn smart except i guess you do want something permanent when youre 80

Adam demands loyality from his employees but then drugs their wives and steals them from their husbands. Then the author makes Tom into a pervert at the end so it all seems alright. TRASH

stealing another mans wife should be the title . i hated it.

ow i guess someone has to write them

Wheatie doesn't seem to be able to figure out how Adam could REALLY seduce Sweety, or is too lazy to put in that effort. That is, IMHO, where the erotic lies. The rest is just mechanics...interesting but not nearly as exciting as a gradual emotional transition. I agree that Adam would not respect a woman he had to dope up, at least enough to marry her...she brings nothing but good looks to his life. 3*

Corporate governance seems to be misunderstood by so many people and when you write about something you don't know it sounds stupid. The Board does not run day to day operations of a company and the CEO is accountable to the Board, not the other way around.

Did not like. Looking forward to your next submission.

There's no spirit in this story. It's not imaginative and it's not even well written.

Powerful men rule the world, While wimps write silly complaints because of their own unstellar performance. Everything seems NORMAL.

Just another slut / cluck / alpha male story.

bad shit

Slut wife, asshole Boss, Wimp Husband willing to trade his wife for advancement. Sick Sh+t!

The husband is barely there. This is about domination. OK if that's your thing.

Ok sorry i'm missing the point. what i mean is "kill the fucking cunt whore woman bitch and wimp cuckold faggot fuck".

Oh yeh. That feels better. 3*

But it could really use some editing.

Tom should have fucked his whore wife in the asshole and then made Adam suck her shit off of his cock to degrade him before cutinng his throat, then cutting Adam's cock off and shoving it down his whore wife's throat so she gagged to death on it

If you have to drug A woman for sex , you are not A man. This story should

be in the rape section.

It pretty much sums up your abilities as a writer.

This story is more like a 'fairy tale', albeit a little perverted. Tom comes off as a real slimeball.....NOT as all-powerful. He drugs her, rapes her, while providing a little 'BDSM'. Yea, a great future they'll have.

Taylor doesn't appear as Miss Goody-goody, rather a she pure bone-fide "GOLD DIGGER". If two people were made for each other, it's Taylot and Adam....AKA, Mr. all-powerful.

Some of the commentators on this figment of imasgination, should really get a life, it's a story, thats all it is, it's not real? Get it, Wake up idiots, to those who are vile and abusive, well really, you don't deserve any sympathy at all.

Making comments to your readers, calling them idiot isn't going to help make your story better. I doubt if they are looking for sympathy and will give none to you. You should have realized by now, no matter how good a story may be, there will always be somebody that doesn't like it. Live with it or stop writing. Even the best of writers on this site get negative comments on some of their stories. It's just a fact of life, you can't please everybody. You may feel better calling your readers names, but your story will suffer for it.

Great piece of work and why is it that people that don't like loving wife stories always seam to read them to only bash the writers. If you don't like the stories stop reading. Those of us the do like them don't even read your negative comments anymore, find something more useful to do with your time.

As for this story I liked everything but the end. Maybe putting a different end to it where the husband and wife stayed together but she basically was the bosses slut and husband was turned into a full cuckold would work better.

Piss poor story...Don't care to be called an idiot...I think this was my last qualitywheat story.

Enjoyed your story. Keep up the writing. Thanks.

man its like shakespear dude!...look downward???are you serious...look downward---classic!!!! hey man you forgot to add'loins' somewhere in this..and if the dude was that good looking and rich the average woman wouldn't need a pill to get in the act...and if he was that powerful...he would have sent the husband off without being whimpy and having him volinteer....weak! dude read Shoguy for confident old guys -well endowed and sexy young babes married that crave the power!

Adam reminds me of the twit who brought one of the biggest banks in uk to it's knees, while stealing the wife of a subordinate.

The prosperity of fools lasts until their folly is exposed.

If you have a skank cheating whore for a wife might as well sell the cunt for a good price.

Exciting and very well written......love your imagination.....keep the stories coming and thank you.

Don't see how this is a Loving Wife in any sense of the word.

The story was good till her husband had asked her to sleep with Adam. End was disappointing

He gives up his wife for a promotion? More likely to divorce her, expose the boss, Tanya and still get the promotion.

Sorry. Regards,

I read tried to read one more of your stories.woman or a fag for sure.if you re a woman then whore would best describe you hey, it even sounds better than no answer.

What is it with stories that has a "happy marriage" destroyed by a wife who falls in love with another guy after ONE FUCK? Does that even happen to any female above the age of 16?

If a marriage can be traded for a couple of orgasms, then it was shitty from the start. I'm so glad women like this only exist in horny authors' minds who write for erotic sites. Can we get some 3 dimensional women please?

That made no sense. Adam was an easy target. He had a lot of enemies. Tom took his time. One night Adam's car was run off the road and he was killed. Six months later, his ex-wife disappeared. No one ever found her body. Tom was just smarter than they were. And he had more friends. I have to say this was badly written. Even for fiction is was so implausible as to be laughable. 1 star.

Your story needs just a little logic. For example, wifey could have told Tom of her fantasy to be the wife of a real VIP, or that her parents told her that having kids with a very rich VIP would be the best thing she could do with her life. Just help us to accept such an apparent 180 degree switch by setting it up.

Totally awful story. Could you have written Tom any more of a wimp, I don't think that's possible. Just wasted 20 minutes of my life that I'll never get back !

2*'s

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to help your score an to help dear annony get his sad fag life back1!!

I LOVED THE STORY UNTIL TAYLOR HAD A PHONE CONVERSATION WITH TOM IN ADAM'S PRESENCE. That part & everything after that was anticlimactic.

I also do not like when any woman or man are seduced by use of drugs. It's against the law in most, if not all, jurisdictions.

DESPITE my objections THIS STORY IS EROTIC.

Rating: ☆☆☆☆+ (4.35/5.0 = 87% = A)

Well written with great sex. You really pull us in the sex scenes,I just wish there had been more conflict with Tom when he found out she was cheating. But great story 5 stars!

Anyone can write a fuck story...some do it well. What you wrote was an attempt at a love story...You failed. ...oh my god! You drugged me into loving you...oh I'm yours forever..oh fuck me ..I can't stop loving you ..

Be aware your dream is reality!!!

I liked the sex and I liked the “Romance”. In many respects this was an x rated Cinderella story with an Evil Prince Charming. Adam starts off as purely wanting to dominate Taylor Sexually and also take from his subordinate Tom, by taking advantage of Tom’s overriding desire to replace Adam at the head of the company. Adam and Taylor fall in love, and ironically Adam replaces Tom in Taylor’s life while Tom embarks on his path to replace Adam with the company. The readers who see Taylor as gold digger miss the fact that had she stayed with Tom, she would have been married to the CEO’s salary any way. This story wasn’t a home run but very good nonetheless.

What an utterly stupid story. Sorry I read it! Dumb, Dumb, Dumb...

It's just too simplistic, never really explained why she was suddenly swept off her feet by the CEO. She was apparently happy with her own husband, so why the about face.

Your intro said "tale of a beautiful, and very loving wife" Very loving wives wouldn't behave like this.

Rushed to an unbelievable and disappointing cliche mending. There was no angst or real emotion. Thanks for the effort, though.

Give me a break

IT FRIGGIN SUCKED!!

Why on Earth that guy’s “biggest asset was,he didn't do hands on every day tasks”?!This is A BIG NONSENSE!On the contrary,a CEO’s biggest asset IS SOLVING EVERY DAY TASKS,too and DOING HANDS ON IT!STOP WRITING SUCH RIDICULOUS BULLSHIT!

Horrible. This is garbage and compares with the worst of this category.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5).

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Good story' interesting twist at the end. Came reading the first page lol. Had to come back and read the rest later.

POS 1*

1*

Well at least the bottom of the barrel has lots of company.

So very dumb. The author doesn't really understand the relationship between a CEO and "The Board". The CEO reports to the board not the other way around. Tom, would become part of his Executive Team not a member of the board. That really detracted from the story. Otherwise, just a stereotypical "Cuck" story with the wimpy husband, All Powerful boss and cheating wife...1*

Meh. Quit writing troll fodder.

When Adam reveled that this was all a setup, I thought the author was going to do something different and have Tom figure out that the 'problems' were BS and decide to go back to his wife. But instead, the cliche wins again.

dirtball

Get the gun and have many bullets..

DOL

BS

Gross.

Offal.

Tom should have gotten off the plane and killed all 3. The ultimate BTB..

Many appropriate comments, but I think "pathetic" is the word you're all looking for...

(Of course, that could apply to the story, or the writer...)