homeErotic PoetryIn Pleasure, In PainPublic Comments

All Comments  for

In Pleasure, In Pain

byCinner©
All
Comments (7)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by tazz31704/27/12

WHICH GIVES THE MOST

or who receives the most. TK U MLJ LV NV

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by FrostyZen04/28/12

Don't know much...

at all about anything poetic but i know what i like. This was sexy and sensual.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Cinner04/29/12

Thank you

Thank you for your kind comment FrostyZen! It's my first positive review ever! :o)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Scotsman6904/30/12

So lovely.

Thank you, and keep writing. Please.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by CaraDailey04/30/12

Wow

I can't express just how erotic and interesting I found this poem. Very moving. Keep up the great work!!!!!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Cinner05/07/12

Thank you!

Thanks to Cara and Scotsman. I still don't understand the other comment, I've spent days trying, but thank you for reading my poem. I really do appreciate you taking the trouble. :o)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by njoyjade05/21/12

Well done.

I like the style. I never thought to compare "scooping honey from the comb", pretty cool. I've had trouble understanding the same "other comment" issue pertaining to some of my submissions, but decided to stop spinning my wheels. :)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to In Pleasure, In Pain  or
More submissions by Cinner.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel