All Comments on 'The Twins Take Over Ch. 07'

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123udontknowme123udontknowmealmost 12 years ago
xD Was so worried for a minute there!

Thank you, thank you, thank you... For not letting Anneke get raped by her brother. Please don't let it happen again should Rolf have a hold on her once more. Also, maybe that was another reason they wanted the panters to be extinct, their bites were able to deteriorate wolf flesh (hopefully just Dire wolves or when they're lives depended on it). Can't wait to read more. Short stories or not, they cone out faster than any other story I'm currently reading. Keep up the good work! Will be looking for more. :D

Your loyal reader...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
too short

too short

PoisonlovePoisonlovealmost 12 years ago
Great but short

what's going on? you 2 busy? come on I know you can do much more in just one chapter! Now I gotta sit again and expect roots to come out of my legs waiting for the next chapter :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More Please!!

I have been waiting for this story for days. Literally, waiting for days.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Finally!!!!!

I have been logging on every day just to see if it was there yet. Yay! Please write more, I don't think I could wait that long for a chapter again. Love this story!

MizTMizTalmost 12 years ago
Thanx

for letting me know about this chapter. Lit has been really weird about when they post stories. And everyone needs to give you a break. If it were easy to write a story we'd all be authors, and I'm not. I just don't have the ability (yet) to write a story so I know it's hard work. I'm thankful for this chapter no matter the length. And I think this is a great chapter. You let us know that Rolf was unsuccessful in his attempt to mate w/Anneke thanks in part to Axel. We know even if Axel doesn't that yes Anneke is his mate. We know that the cougars have great powers and we'll probably learn more about them as time goes by. We know Carr and the Council are ready to work w/the Jensen pack in ridding the pack of Rolf. Not bad for a 1 page chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Thank You

Thanks for this chapter.

Can't wait to read how they're going to kick Rolf's @$$.

I'll be waiting.

DarkFaerie1801

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
awsome

nearly missed this chapter ... one of the greatest stories and authors around ..

richard aka rigylicks

JustifyablyGrownJustifyablyGrownalmost 12 years ago
Oh Please!

You try coming up with an origional story line, populate it with believable characters and see if you can write at warp speed! So you waited for days - be glad lil' is a days per chapter writer and not a weeks or months per chapter writer!

Keep going lil" we love your writing and if you can keep posting every few days more power to you - but take your time to produce the quality we have come to expect!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
THANK U

Suddenly find out this one today.was dsapointed not 2 c the twins at the end of wolf's pet series.m very glad now :D

W8ing 4 the next egerly

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