All Comments on 'Eyes Like Winona'

Your work just keeps getting better and better. You can really feel the desperation Neil is feeling as he turns down this dark path. Keeping with realism, I doubt we'll be hearing Drake's story any time soon, but I hope these two can open up to each other, work out their pain. Also, I hope Toby gets out in one piece, because it's looking quite dire right now.

May your dark writings hold mercy for these characters and I will be eagerly awaiting your next work.

I think this may have been the best job of characterization out of all your stories. I really felt for the kids thrust into this situation. Couldn't help but feel the desperation in Neil to keep his family together, no matter how tough it was. This shade of innocence about him despite having life deal him such a tough hand. Drake is such a sweet guy. I like him and hope we learn more about him. What is his reason for being there? I can't help but think that if he just wants to see Drake again, just ask him out! :) He doesn't HAVE to go forward with the prostitution to see him.

Can you put them out sooner than 2 weeks? Pretty please :)

I HOPE DRAKE SAVE HIM FROM THAT LIFE

I have to say, you never pull any punches. Your stories are so gritty, achingly sad, terrifying and authentic. It's like living inside Neil's head and seeing life through his eyes, and you can actually feel the hopelessness inside him as he contemplates selling himself to take care of his family.

What a fucked up world where a teenager has to feed 5 people on a minimum-wage job; it's no wonder he succumbs to the desperation. Trying to get his brother out of jail before he's killed and put another through college- what a mess.

Please don't make us wait 2 weeks for the next chapter.

But do you think you could stop making 98% of your straight/masculine gay males complete assholes? All the women and feminine gays are angels, yet you couldn't even let the 10 year old boy be a decent.

Powerful.

I love all your stories, they're always so emotional and beautifully written, and this one is no different. I cried numerous times and now I can't wait to see how this story develops. I will be anxiously waiting for the next installment.

I couldn't help but feel for Neil, poor thing.

On a soapbox tangent, this story made me think about just how blase the world has become in regards to female pros. Yes, indeed, this is a sad story of desperation, but so is every desperately sad story of every female hooker. The world just rarely sees their stories anymore because they're hardly unique. I can't imagine many would easily be okay with selling their bodies on the street.

LOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!! So cant wait to read more. Please update soon.

i need more please don't wait two weeks!!!!!!

Definitely one of the best I've read yet.

I cried a little. This is so beautifully written

Wow I really like this. I can't wait to read more. It's quite a change from the usual stories on the website. Good luck with finals by the way. I always hate big tests. Hell, who doesn't?

Good God, this is awesome. Already one of the very best stories on the site.

i have to say that i love this story the most ,i wish it would turn out for the best ,i really wish that ferdinand fall inlove with ryan ,or someone rich at least and help him out of this ,hope the next chapter will be soon

god i am so depressed now.?

Another simply great read. Made me all nervous and angry and fascinated at the same time, very realistic and touching.

I have to admit I really felt uncomfortable reading this but it's not a bad thing! I just don't usually read this type of stuff. But I think it's good to read this type of stories from time to time. Thank you. I hope characters will have better luck in their future.

I just want to give him a cuddle.

I like Drake and i hope that when Toby gets out he helps