All Comments on 'Last Mission Ch. 02'

by cckuay

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LadyPartsLadyPartsalmost 12 years ago
Excellent! Intrigue and mystery

Excellent story you're brewing here. I wonder if her target really was the guy she thought she killed or was killing him and subsequently allowing herself to be captured how she planned to kill the real target? If so, who's the real target and if it's someone in the room, who ordered it?

Love these kinds of stories. I do wish there were less typos and little errors, but it doesn't keep me from reading this fabulous story!

cckuaycckuayalmost 12 years agoAuthor
To all those who like my story

Please add your comments so I can be motivated to write more.

I also try to accommodate readers' suggestions when writing the next chapter.

Susan

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
Real Cold****

But good reading. Thanks for sharing.

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