My only complaint is that the chapters are very short. I am intrigued and want to read more.
Finally a story with some intelligence. I also like that the master isn't a brute.
Where's the rest of it? This isn't a cliff-hanger; it is incomplete. Please finish it.
more, please?
It's odd that David sounds a lot like me. Bewitched and in control at the same time. I kind of hope they end up falling in love. Molto bene!
Loved this... A very stimulating Read;)
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I like the story so far...
My only complaint is that the chapters are very short. I am intrigued and want to read more.
I want more!
Finally a story with some intelligence. I also like that the master isn't a brute.
Where's the rest of it? This isn't a cliff-hanger; it is incomplete. Please finish it.
more, please?
Sounds like me
It's odd that David sounds a lot like me. Bewitched and in control at the same time. I kind of hope they end up falling in love. Molto bene!
Mouthwatering
Loved this... A very stimulating Read;)
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