All Comments on 'Talking Shop'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
What the fuck?

im sorry but what dafuk did i just read? it was in no way erotic and therefore pointless to put it on this site! you do realise that this site is Literotica right?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Refreshing!

I saw the satire and appreciated it immensely as a comment about writers. Unlike the previous commentator I've noted that the story is tagged as non-erotic. I've been looking at your other work as well. Keep writing, I like what I see.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I lost track of who was saying what.

Every once in a while you should give a clue as to which character is speaking.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
SARCASTIC SATIRE SPEAKS SYLLABLES SILENT

basking in each's glory of themselves. TK U MLJ LV NV

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 12 years ago
A most

intriguing piece. You're a woman of many talents.

mary_aranxiamary_aranxiaover 11 years ago
Devilishly clever

Polyamorous relationships portrayed! Love this!

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