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Offspring Ch. 001

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by Dry_opinion06/01/12

Good read

Simple, not too exciting, yet interesting, sexy and positive story. Author's consistency and logic make it very easy to read, while his imagination and attention to details make the story inspiring. I liked it very much.

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by NW_bi_boy11/15/13

Long and enjoyable

I have enjoyed reading this as you have metered out chapters. I'm leaving this on your first chapter to encourage others to read on and explore the full story.

I hope that you will finish it, since as of this comment, there has been a break in writing and it is not complete.

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by Sixtynine69696909/30/16

Great storyline and interesting characters/aliens

Unfortunately this story doesn't get finished. Probably the author has died as he was getting pretty old and was a smoker. Read it as it is interesting and entertaining.

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