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Offspring Ch. 003

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by Anonymous

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by debbie2free05/07/12

Too short

You gotta make each chapter a touch longer sweetie

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by Talemaster05/08/12

Fair comment Debbie

I decided originally to publish three chapters at a time, not knowing only one per day would get uploaded. A bit late to change it now since there are several chapters already in the queue. Hope it does not irritate too much. Thanks for the comment.

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by Dry_opinion06/01/12

Mindblowing

The fantasy is becoming even more fantastic. Great job!

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