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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/07/12

it is` always inthe bus or train

in india for a wife to cheat.

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by Anonymous05/07/12

Indian cities are bane to women

The highest rape cases in the world is in Indian cities.There men have no respect for all women.The so called liberated indian is a farce.

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by Anonymous05/07/12

very good writing!

Indeed, you write very well. I have read your other submissions as well. Please keep going.

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by writingn00b05/09/12

Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the comments, positive or negative! Anyone interested in finding out what happens next to Baljeet? What would you want to see happen next?

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by Anonymous05/13/12

More...

The story rang kinda true and it certainly had pace to it. How about you introduce an element of rural India? Particularly since they're just off the bus...perhaps a power-play by the village mukhiya?

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by Anonymous05/14/12

Glad you are back

Glad to see you are back.....Please keep up the good work

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by Anonymous07/30/12

aman

good story i wna threesome with couple in punjab and patiala.......m no 9803284848

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by Anonymous03/18/14

I can relate to it

because it has happened with me. the bus conductor in my case. you reminded me of it...... how erotic.

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