All Comments on 'Fallon's Final Fling Ch. 02'

- For me,this story is not complete until a Ch. 3 is written that includes some serious payback for Salena and those dirty cops.

- A creative writer should be able to come up with ways to see that revenge is taken,especially on that piece of shit,dirty Officer Larson.She (and apparently her husband) break more laws than they enforce. A tip to local law enforcement about these ass-wads should get the ball rolling.

- As far as the bride-to-be is concerned,one of the wedding guests should give Ryan plenty of quarters for tolls if he's planning to tap her ass during the honeymoon. After-all,it's gonna be like entering The Lincoln Tunnel!

First story of yours I've read. Last one too. Chapter 2 is real Crap.

First story of yours that I've read, and I loved it!

What’s next? Payback? Blackmail for the bride? A surprise pregnancy with Bill as the father? So many questions!!!

Great story. What a surprise the ending was. I never saw it coming.